| "Piccolo's Embrace" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 04:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* I love your fic and the pictures very beautiful and spicy indeed. The Nameksei-jin are full of contradictions. They have fangs but they only drink water. This shows that at one time they had to have been meat eaters most likely. Nameks have adams apples and not to mention those muscles Piccolo has, the deep voice. All male traits. I think it is Kami tells the Z fighters of the storm of Namek that nearly wiped out the whole Namek population. And the big one Guru is his Eng. name reproduced by spitting out eggs. I personally believe that because of all these contradictions above that there were females once. Life will find away. Gomen for babbling. Bura-chan |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 04:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* I love your fic and the pictures very beautiful and spicy indeed. The Nameksei-jin are full of contradictions. They have fangs but they only drink water. This shows that at one time they had to have been meat eaters most likely. Nameks have adams apples and not to mention those muscles Piccolo has, the deep voice. All male traits. I think it is Kami tells him of the storm of Namek that nearly wiped out the whole Namek population. And the big one Guru is his Eng. name reproduced by spitting out eggs. I personally believe that because of all these contradictions above that there were females once. Life will find away. Gomen for babbling. Bura-chan |
Reviewed By: D.P-Chan On: November 01, 2002 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the content. It was very entertaining. I just loove Piccolo. He is just right for any gal. Too bad he ain't real....or I would have to be the beauty in the fic. I did not like only one part. The Veggie part.....he's my boy, maybe it could have been Cell or even Nappa or someone else mean....Veggie is my boy. But the hentai parts were fantastic.. I wish you could have made a sequal to their love. You have a certain gift...continue what you're doing and don't stop.
I feel you have the same hankering for the Green-Flesh as I........ |
Reviewed By: Lo On: October 26, 2002 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic. Piccolo fics are rare finds, nice one. |
