| "The Slap in the Ass by Reality Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Alanisia On: May 01, 2005 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incredebly harsh, yet refreshing. Most "short stories," if you will, have been sweetened and sugared up to be nothing like reality: This is nothing like that. Completely brutal and to the point, your style mimics how cold and uncaring society is under the mask. You're able to hook the reader AND provide the extra twist at the end that will render them speechless. Bravo!
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Title: Wow..thats good f-ing shit
Reviewed By: Neiko On: September 26, 2003 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...i dont know HOW to respond after that..it was...AWESOME!!!Thats barely even BEGINS to describe it!Keep it up,cuz im gonna hurt you if you dont!LOL ^-^
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Reviewed By: ninja On: February 09, 2003 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you, are my new favorite auther I realy think that if you wanted to you could get published easy. but then again I love horror and such so i am biased |
Reviewed By: Mr Biggs On: October 17, 2002 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Genius! Sheer Genius! |
Reviewed By: Masquerade_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Um, just, wow. That one smacked me in the face. Holy freakin' crap. Just, wow. I can't really think of anything to say about Chapter One, except that... just, crap. It was a very, 'intense' if you will, chapter. I appreciate your lack of ignorance (I'm hoping you understand what I mean), even when writing it in the middle of the night (!!!), because that's very helpful to the readers! You did a great job. I'm definitely going to read your coming chapters. |
Reviewed By: Masquerade On: September 25, 2002 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a very talented writer and an extremely in-depth person. The story shows how depressing and real life truly is, and how everything that you worked so hard to get can disappear so quickly. I will most definitely read any other pieces of work you may write and comment, because I really respect your style of writing, views and opinions. |
Reviewed By: Andar Vana On: September 13, 2002 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good little story. It really shows the darker side of fate and human nature and how children do have a strong faith that everything will be fine when its not. Very indepth detail adds to the feeling that these things do happen and that draws the reader in a little more. Good story Lady Saturn. |
