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| "NeverEnding Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Monlemu
Reviewed By: Nirasta On: October 14, 2004 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesant!!! Interesting!! But you could of made it a lot more sensual. I mean damn...that was the first time they admitted each other's love!! I personally do not know why this fic was rated nc-17. in all, i enjoyed it.
| Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 00:20 CST
Comment/Review:
GEEEZ!! Don't pay any attention to your other reviewer!! I thought this fic was sweet as can be!! Anyway, they must've been reviewing another fic, because it obviously didn't happen "right out in the street" it was in a forest clearing!! SHEESH!!
This was a very nice one-shot, short and sweet! The story flowed very nicely, there were some spelling errors, but nothing major!! You might want to have a beta-reader check over your fics before you post them, it's always nice to have another pair of eyes look over your work, because they might catch something you missed. But all in all, I think this fic was lovely! I'm going to go see if you have any other TxGt's up! ^.^ | Reviewed By: Confusion On: November 01, 2002 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um...saditic means pleasure from other people's pain, don't use words you don't know.
And it was good and all, but the lemon was horrible, and apparently it took place right out in the street. Um...yeah, not very practical.
Still it was a good start. |
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