| "Once We Were Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: shadow On: October 25, 2002 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue with this fic. I need to know what happens next. I also hope you will make it into a Vegeta/Goten fic, you don't see many of them. |
Reviewed By: Kewla On: September 13, 2002 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was reading NC17 on F.F. but now I'm looking around. Found your story and I like it. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 01:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oohers... Unconventional pairing but with definite potential. Methinks Goku and ChiChi are uncharacteristically mature, but that's hardly a flaw. I'm watching this one! |
