| "Hopeless Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: inoccent_asassin On: March 13, 2004 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! it`s not aya!!!! honestly if it was aya, the red head who smiles easyly I`d be happy for a long time!! But anyway, Great story! please continue ^^
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Title: "Saru"
Reviewed By: GokuSaiyuki On: February 06, 2004 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMR!! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!! THIS IS LIKE MY SECOND FAVORITE FIC EVER AND I"VE READ ALOT!!!! PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!! AND THEN EMAIL ME WHEN YOU HAVE THEM UP!!!! YoukaiGokusGurl@aol.com OMR!! ROCK ON!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kionala [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 12:09 CST
Comment/Review:
*jumping up and down happyly* YES! Finaly some else with Omi then Ken. Red hair. it had to be either Schu-schu or Aya. ^_^ yay is there more?
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Reviewed By: Suzaku On: June 19, 2003 18:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hate cliffhangers. I like it. Please write more soon. |
Reviewed By: Firebirdy On: June 12, 2003 11:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
HAAAAAAAA! You can't leave it like that! You have to finish. Happy ending please. |
Reviewed By: CaT On: June 08, 2003 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!! *grovles on the floor* pwease pwease pwease pwease pwease pwease pwease pwease??????? ~_~ and who killed crawford??? wwwwhhhhhoooooooooooooo? YOU. MUST. CONTINUE!!!!!!! this story is awesome! and i wanna see aya and omi togeather!!! keep it up *begs for next chapter* *gives u a chocolate covered bishonen muse of ur choice* =^^=V |
Reviewed By: boowoman [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 04:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like this fic! Really good! Please update soon, ne... |
Reviewed By: Todesengel On: February 01, 2003 00:58 CST
Comment/Review:
There you are! I read this on FF net before. It is good that I found it at here. Keep it up! ;) |
Reviewed By: Skye On: December 02, 2002 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Please post again soon. Also, about this secret ending that may require a sequel... is it happy? Happy is nice 'cause I like Omi-kun. And Nagi-kun. And Aya-kun. Y'know, if they all got together, then Nagi would be happy too. At any rate, good job and keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: laila On: October 28, 2002 06:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I remember seeing this fic up at FF.net..So it was taken down because of the rating ban? Ah well...Nice fic overall! =)...The content is interesting..You could probably flesh out the descriptions a bit more and Farfie was DEFINITELy OOC.........hehehe =)
laila@animescores.com |
Reviewed By: andryce On: November 07, 2002 09:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent keep writing |
