| "A Cop Story" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 07:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh, I'm so glad you revised this. It reminded me of the fic, and I've had a great time re-reading. Absolutely nothing was lost on the thrird read, it was still as inventive, clever and entertaining as the first time I read it. Thanks for a GREAT fic... Now, please stop reading this and go and work on 'Spacestation'... :D
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Title: FAINT!
Reviewed By: NSBVEGE On: November 29, 2003 20:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MY LORD WHERE THE FUCK WAS I WHEN U WROTE THIS STORY!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!! HI IM NSBVEGETA!! GOD ME LOVED UR STORY , OHHHH IT MADE ME WANT TO GET ARRESTED!! YEAH BABY!!! THE LEMONS WERE FANTASTIC!!!! U HAVE A KNACK FOR THIS I ENJOYED IT LOTS WELL WRITTEN 2 THUMBS WAY WAYYYYYYY UP!!! LATER!
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Title: THANK YOU!!!
Reviewed By: the_lil_lune On: November 22, 2003 21:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i read this fic A LONG TIME AGO. when it was still on ff.net! i'm sooooo gald you decided to finish it!!! i remember you had stop cos some people thought it was too graphic or something. god when i saw this fic it was like seeing an old friend. i loved this story when it was started and i'm so happy that i get to finish reading it. THANK YOU!!! -the lil lune
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Reviewed By: MistressChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 23:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was a great story. I loved it, and I really enjoyed reading it. You are a very good writer. I hope you will write more stories like this one. Anyways, it totally rocked! I now like cops....some what. Lmao, at least more than I did before. I actually liked you idea of putting Yamcha and Raditz together. I can really relate to the kind of relationship they had. I have a similar relationship like it with my guy friend. Putting them together also showed that you respect people no matter what their sexual prefrence is. I respect that. ^_^ I also thought it was great that almost everyone had someone to be with. (Even #16) That was a great idea. Well, anyways, your story was very enjoyable. I hope to see more great stories from you. ^_~ ~The chick with Blue hair~ *MistressChaos*
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Reviewed By: v/b On: November 05, 2003 19:27 EST
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Wow. I... wow. That was... wow. Can you do it again? Pretty please? Don't I sound perverted :) I really enjoyed this fic and seeing as I just finished it about 5 minutes ago, I think I'm gonna go check out your other work. But, there is one small request/conplaint... any way you take it. There was only one really good lemon of v/b and only ONE lemon of G/Ch. That kinda sucked. Maybe you could write more next time you post such a fabulous piece of work. TTFN
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Reviewed By: V/B On: November 05, 2003 19:26 EST
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Wow. I... wow. That was... wow. Can you do it again? Pretty please? Don't I sound perverted :) I really enjoyed this fic and seeing as I just finished it about 5 minutes ago, I think I'm gonna go check out your other work. But, there is one small request/conplaint... any way you take it. There was only one really good lemon of v/b and only ONE lemon of G/Ch. That kinda sucked. Maybe you could write more next time you post such a fabulous piece of work. TTFN
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Reviewed By: V/B On: November 05, 2003 19:25 EST
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Reviewed By: Da Bomb On: April 05, 2003 16:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
font color="dark blue">I loved this all the way and I think u are a great author. I first read this on FF.net but when it came off I didn't know u came here. I loved reading every mintue of this ja ne ^_# |
Reviewed By: vegetachanlover On: January 26, 2003 17:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh...i love this fic. i remember when you had it over at ff.net. it was always one of my first stories that i would go to, in order to chech for updates. i loved the epilogue...i thought that it was a nice way to end the story, with not just goku and chi chi's wedding.
i loved the humour...reading it for about the seventh time...it just gets funnier with every read. i hope to see more from you! bye! |
Reviewed By: Raska On: January 14, 2003 19:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*contented sigh*... Just felt like reading one of my all time favorite V/B fictions again. Boy, you write some seriously steamy sex. I love you. Bravo on a job well done. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 21:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have resisted the urge to read this for quite sometime...but it was recommended by so many friends that I finally decided to give it a try tpday...boy am I glad I did.
Truly amazing. One of the best B/Vs I've ever read. |
Reviewed By: Reji On: July 27, 2003 11:18 EDT
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Wow, this fic was really hilarious!
I mean the ginyu force playing volleyball, pilaf and garlic jr owning a pizza place, and popo as a mayer!
And also very original couples. I loved it!!!
Please don't stop doing this!!! |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2002 14:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED THIS STORY!!! IT HAD ME CRACKING UP, ESPECIALLY THE SLUMBER PARTY CHAPTER NAD THE PART WHERE GOKU SAID HE FELT LIKE AN "ASS PIRATE"!!! *wiping tears from eyes* PLUS I LOVED THE LEMONS AS WELL *evil little hentai grin* |
Reviewed By: raska [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2002 23:35 EST
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You did an absolutely magnificent job! Writing style is engaging and exciting. Plently of all of the stuff the best ones are made of. Plot, original humor, action, character development, lemon (and you did those very well, i must say. i loved his line when he turned super saiyan) What makes me pause is the fact that you don't have hundreds of comments. you should. Once again, beautiful work- and i loved vegeta's character the best. He was an ass, but you brought out a realistic soft(er) side in him without taking away the lovable ass. you rock- your friends would be jealous if they only knew. |
Reviewed By: Jasp_jedi4hire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 20:57 EDT
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I loved it. This was a great story. I am a police officer and ya know some of the scenes are so true to life and hilarious. Great Job! I can't wait to see more. Maybe a sequel, if you want help I can think of a few things maybe use evil buu's form? |
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