| "A Cop Story" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Title: Scream like little Girls..
Reviewed By: Diva Eyez On: April 04, 2005 23:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, this is so good! And FUNNY!!! Great job ::laughs::
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Reviewed By: miaka16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 22:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's actually been awhile since I read (and reread this) but it's only recently that I've begun writing fiction and have learned the importance of reviews..... I really enjoy this fic...this has been one of my favorites for awhile...it's amusing, well-developed, hott, and an overall amazing read...you should give yourself more credit, you're an amazing writer! Thanks for sharing your work with the rest of us!
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: January 24, 2005 19:16 EST
Comment/Review:
wow i remember reading this story on another site i toataly loved it
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Title: A cops story
Reviewed By: Zonkie On: August 26, 2004 00:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
HORRID ABSOLUTELY HORRID..............PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Try to be more creative int he future!
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Title: omg how cool is this
Reviewed By: DBZ Maniac On: April 13, 2004 08:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this fanfic is well safe and really orginal one of the best fanfics I have ever read and im not jokin PLS make more or il personally c 2 it the u do
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Title: I Thought it was good!
Reviewed By: MaL On: March 23, 2004 16:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a great job with this chapter you should be proud of yourself lol
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Reviewed By: Sai orlianna On: March 10, 2004 22:36 EST
Comment/Review:
I really liked the last chapter. It was definitely a fitting ending. made me smile. I love this story. ^_^
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Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 17:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I didn't keep reviewing, I just kept reading. I did want to say I truly enjoyed your entire fic. Thanks for sharing
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Title: ch 17
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 01:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly enjoyed this chapter...especially the part with Vegeta suggesting Goku follow ChiChi in the phone booth and Goku actually listening to him. R/Y are cute...but I don't think I'd want to read a lemon on that pairing, so it's ok with me that you didn't.
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Title: ch 10
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 22:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, I keep saying to myself I will only read 1 more chapter and then do something productive....guess what, I'm still reading!! I'm hooked...it's great
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Title: ch 5
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 03:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The volleyball game was great...it was easy to follow, in case you were wondering. I had to laugh when 18's hand slapped over her face due to Bulma distracting her own teammates...I loved that part and that Goku was still interested in the ice cream...that's Goku
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Title: ch 3
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 02:59 EST
Comment/Review:
Ok, I'm taking your suggestion and reviewing even though I'm only on chapter 3 and this is completely posted. Since you have joined our B/V group, I had to check out what you've written. I really like this one, I don't know why I didn't see it sooner, probably cuz there so many to choose from. Anyway, great beginning. I like how you've used many of the DBZ characters a lot of fanfics seem to forget about and also that they all seem to be IC. I love the part with Goku stopping ChiChi and giving her a ticket with his cheery attitude. I will read on....
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 15:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an interesting fic! I wish I'd known about it as you were posting it---it really reads like a TV sitcom, with entertaining episodes surrounding a larger plot and it would have been fun to read in "episodes". I must confess I was somewhat skeptical as to how well this concept would mesh in a DBZ fanfic and I think it went really well. you did an excellent job keeping everyone in character and I found it reasonable, believable and utterly enjoyable! Nice job with the lemon, BTW.
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Title: fantastic
Reviewed By: crimson darkness On: January 11, 2004 06:51 EST
Comment/Review:
wow for a first fanfic u have done a great job it's is very well written and extremely addictive i haven't been able to stop since i started but unfortunately sleep won *curses* anywayz keep up the good stories
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Reviewed By: g265 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 10:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great srory
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