| "My God, My Lover." Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Lavender Youko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 21:13 CDT
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Wow... that was awesome! ^_^ Really orginal, highly loveable. A thing about the palms... yes, that does seem true. But did you ever notice that you never see Kaworu's palms anywhere in the episode?? *ponders* I wonder why. XD I've read your other stories via e-mail; a friend sent them to me because they were blocked by parental controls. ^^ I guess I'll just say stuff about the others since I can't access them here. Going Up, Sir? - That was the best Eva yaoi I have ever read! =D All fields of hentai taken into consideration... I note that. ^^ Gym Class - *no comment* >=D Kaworu's a naughty naughty boy! Keep up the *awesome* work! ^_____^
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Reviewed By: Chibi Kitsune On: February 08, 2004 13:51 CST
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"Some pillow talk, but nothing hardcore." You said. Well, if that's your "pillow talk", I hhave to see what your hardcore is! *giggles while thinkng various ... uh, thoughts*
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Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 04:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really, really good. ^^ Nice steamy sex scence. But one gets the impression the rest of the story was a bit rushed. One or two spelling mistakes, not too serious. Very good. ^^ Hope to see more. ~.^ |
Reviewed By: hoshi no tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*purrs like the contented cat she wishes she was* mmmmm, warm fuzzy feelings! Excellent fic. great contrasts. I like your Rei alot. I agree wholeheartedly with firedryad. we need more s/k or k/s yaoi! |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 09:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ME LIKE!!!!! VERY VERY MUCH!!! MORE MORE! PLS! there rnt enough evangelion nc-17s. we neeeeed more!!!! more shinji kaworu.... me need more... |
Reviewed By: Shella-chan On: September 21, 2002 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh ... just beautiful. This is unbelievably sweet and romantic! I like how you characterised Asuka as being power-hungry and selfish, contrasting with Shinji being poor but sincere.
The only critique I have is the language in the lemon eg 'ass', not that it's wrong or anything but I didn't really think it fit in with the ... feel of the rest of the story. (If you know what I mean...)
Aside from that, 'My God, My Lover' was a beautiful story. It's the first time I've read a Shinji/Kaworu fanfic, but I love this pairing & this is a perfect reason why! Kudos!
Cheers,
--Shella-chan |
Reviewed By: Suzume On: October 21, 2002 17:32 CDT
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Sweeeeet **beams** **looks down at the other review while she writes this** um, actually, ass was a good word **turns pink** all the others sound really childish or really scientific. I mean.... gluteaus maximus? Booty? **giggles** But anyway, they were much more in character in this. Plus, it was also very sweet :D **beams** it had warm n' fuzzy feelings.... **purrs happily** la la la.... |
