| "Sins of the Father, Sins of the Son" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: angel_blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 07:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love kasumi and hayate fanfic pairing ... hahaha this is a great fanfic... when will you write chapter 2...
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Reviewed By: babie girl On: February 13, 2005 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was pretty hot. Next time i hope hayate well take her in. I love hayate/kasumi fics
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Reviewed By: Lina Inverse [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 20:52 CST
Comment/Review:
You really should provide a warning for incest. Even though it would have driven me away before I got curious and found out this is actually well, written... Still. It's just better to warn people about things like incest and rape in fics.
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Title: ....SUGOI!!!!!
Reviewed By: Chibi Yuki Eiri On: August 08, 2004 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of my guilty pleasures.. HayatexKasumi! Rock on!!!! ^___^ *waves banners and a "HxK fan" flag* I've seen too many HayatexAyane.. or just don't see the chemistry between them or anything of the sort... but that's just me. ^.^; Anyway.... Love it!!! You're my hero.. *__*\ Write more HxK fics, please!
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Reviewed By: kkre On: February 21, 2004 16:26 CST
Comment/Review:
this story is very good when are you hen are u writing chapter 2!!!!!!!!!!!! Hope it's soon. write more stories on hayate/kasumi or hayate/ayane.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: randomr On: September 10, 2003 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story features great, subtle, yet detailed writing, and a convincing portrayal of both characters. The soft-core descriptions, however, left me wanting more though. A more direct style of describing of physical contact would have been nice. |
Reviewed By: Sining On: July 06, 2003 10:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Finally! Someone else who believes that Kasumi _does_ like Hayate. Yay. |
Reviewed By: Joe On: July 04, 2003 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well there's not much I can say but that I love like this fic. |
Reviewed By: Red_Wulf On: December 13, 2002 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
usually, I hate Incest fan fics (seeing as their poorly written for the most part) I liked this one. Well written, and it made sense. Keep it up.. |
Reviewed By: Chris On: November 13, 2002 21:14 CST
Comment/Review:
This was good, but I really would like to find out more. So yea |
