| "Chocolate" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Joey Rose (check ff.net) On: October 28, 2002 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your story. I was just on ff.net and I have to say WRITE MORE |
Reviewed By: The names Hotaru On: October 22, 2002 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story. You have such a creative way of portraying each characters thoughts as if you were them, I almost believed they were real, live people. It is obvious you put some rea effort into this story. Also, the way the words flowed together was very well done, something, I have to say, many writers can't do so well. Please keep up the good work.
-Hotaru |
Reviewed By: Sweet Li Miyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2002 21:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
AWWW! The first chapter is so cute! I haven't read the rest yet but I'm sure it'll be just as cute! |
Reviewed By: saki On: September 14, 2002 15:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
eh? |
