| "Love In A Day" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Reviewed By: Darkangel2379 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update! this is a great idea and story...
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Title: My last review didn't come out whole
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 19:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay i don't know whats wrong with my last review, but it didn't came out whole ... owh well ... so here i say it again: YOU'RE NOT STOPPING WITH THIS FANFIC ... or i'll come over there and force you :P don't think i wont :P *pulls puppy eyes* pWease!
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Title: Grrr YOU'RE NOT STOPPING
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEEEEPPPPPPP >
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: September 09, 2003 05:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Bugsygurl On: July 09, 2003 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was reading this story on ff.net before they pulled that whole "No NC17 fics allowed" thing. They're so stupid over there.
Anyway, great story! And shame on you for getting outta DBZ! You must write more! Or I'll....I'll....sit here and bitch some more!!
Frightened? You should be!! |
Reviewed By: silver-eyed-Son [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease write more I really like
it but there is one thing won't Trunks be born in the chamber? |
Reviewed By: Faen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is a really good story. I hope that you update really soon. This is a very original story, and I can't wait to read more of your stories. |
Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SHWEET!!! Thank you so much for finally getting a new chapter out! I loved it! I haven't read a lemon that good in ages!! But how could you be getting out of DBZ? I don't think I ever will! lol but if you do that is your thing hehe. Keep the chapters coming! I can't wait to see what he does when he finds out that she is pregnant!!! |
Reviewed By: Me On: February 24, 2003 15:11 CST
Comment/Review:
NO! You can't stop writing!!!! You just can't! Well actually you can, but we don't want you doo! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey girl its about time well im not piss i understand the block thingy it happens but hey u r back at it again and Im glad.The lemon it was good so keep it coming ! i read the fic at ur site a long time ago and im happy that u updated!
Cant wait for next chapy and do not get out of DBZ .
Later! |
Reviewed By: Lone Vixen On: February 23, 2003 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit! i remember reading this story months ago. i had completely forgotten about it until i saw it was updated. i would imagine you have alot of angry people. lol it's understandable though. i'm a writer myself (though i don't put them up anywhere to be read) and writer's block is a real pain. more so when you have to update chapters of yer story.
anyways, i really love the story and the lemons. ^_^! poor Vegeta, him being confused by his own mind. he'll tell bulma he loves her sooner or later. he usually does. ^_^ and of course it's easy for bulma to say because i mean, who COULDN'T love Vegeta?? lol
it's really too bad yer getting disinterested with DBZ. :( It's seems almost impossible to me. lol but oh well. you have a lot of talent i believe so i hope you'll still be writing other stories...and good to know yer gonna finish this one. if not...*shakes fist* lol
i laughed at all yer author inserts. i don't see many people do that but i think they should cause it just adds an outside commedy. ^_^
Anyways, keep up the excellent work!
Latah |
Reviewed By: eyes_on_the_birdie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic! keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would bet anyone hear and now that there is gonna be a lemon in the next chapter. Keep updating! Oh, could you do me a favor? Could you read a story I wrote called Goku:A New Life on Earth? Thanks, bye! |
Reviewed By: ???can't remember On: November 15, 2002 09:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT IS SOOOOOOOOOO DAMN GOOD!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE....:D:D:D:D |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should like so get the fic on with! I love that idea, Vegeta and Bulma trapped heh. You could make a whole series, a different couple gets trapped in there each time lol it'd get a little old tho. But it was just kind of funny to think about.... |
Reviewed By: vegie_bul (vegie_bowl) actually the name is ollymae!^-~` On: October 16, 2002 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
KILLER!!!!! I LOVE your fic. Excpecially your comments i love doing that also. I'll be looking for more of yours. And hey don't worry about not having a long fic, if you did i wouldn't have enough time to finish it.
^-~` |
Reviewed By: LaVon On: September 15, 2002 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite fics ever and I hate what FF.net is doing, even worse but A Lot of my other favs are gone. I almost cried when I realized that. Update Soon plz. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 14, 2002 19:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yep, it's me again. I'll start reviewing when you put up chap #8. Did you know that if you rearrange the letters in LIAD it spells out LAID (sorry I couldn't resist). Don't mind me, I'm in a joking mood today. TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: Goat On: September 14, 2002 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. |
Reviewed By: Subu On: September 14, 2002 13:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I already was reading your story at fanfiction-net, but due to their new policy I found this site and decided to make this my new favorite site. I think your story is very funny and original. |
Reviewed By: Heikgan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2002 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
were are the reiwers this rocks |
