| "The Storm" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: marlene_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2011 09:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great fic! i love it !! Could be something more exciting than being with an aroused saiyan in a bed bag? :D |
Title: got me warmed up
Reviewed By: marron1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 00:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved your story, PLEASE keep them coming. I just add you to fav. list.
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Title: caramelheart
Reviewed By: caramelheart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this at The Lemonade Stand. I usually read epics, but this one was good even though it wasn't 50 chapters long! Great lemony fic!
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Reviewed By: halfbreed saiyan goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 09:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this little fic. I was wondering, how in Kami's name did they end up TOGETHER in a storm? Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Soul Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2003 07:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great lemon |
Reviewed By: sugarfreak On: April 07, 2003 19:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gotta say,it's a good story. I love the way you put a lot of details into it.Also,how the story starts and they just happen to be stuck in a cave. |
Reviewed By: Legana On: December 25, 2002 08:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic =)
I read most of your B/V lemons on fanfiction, but that was a long time ago, so I decided to read them again, and happy that I did =)
I love the way you desribed the lemon, I love the way you made Vegeta have control and made her so crazy, this is the way it should be.
Your Vegeta is atleast not OOC, like most. It's great how you understand that you cannot let her have her control over him, escpecialy sinds it is the first time they have sex (seeing his Pride and all) very good!
I write Vegeta myself like that as well ( still too lazy to place my fics on the pc lol)
but that doesn't matter.
It's great how you write his thoughts as well, very funny ^-^
I hope you will write many more B/V lemons in your future writing life, I love your one-shots.
A Very merry christmas and a happy new year. |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2002 11:03 EDT
Comment/Review:
I read this on FF and I read again here. I read here now for NC17 snice FF is being stupid. I really liked it a lot I.m sure I'll it again. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 14, 2002 19:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter and finger lickin good ^_~. I love Vegeta's pov and the way he describes how he feels and what he's doing to Bulma. Naughty, naughty boy. I couldn't review when I wanted to cause MMO went down and I couldn't wait to take my shower. Yeah this chap finally sent me over the edge ^_^. I plan to reread the rest of your stuff when I get a chance. Again, great fic!! |
Reviewed By: Plyric On: September 14, 2002 15:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your typical awesome work!!! I have always loved your stories and I plan to continue enjoying them here on Mediaminer.org now. Ummm, I really need to get to my bedroom... =)
EXCELLENT WORK. =))) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 14, 2002 04:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Delicious chapter. Sweet too. I love the way Vegeta took care of Bulma, removing her wet clothes and trying to get her warm by getting into the sleeping bag with her. The way she noticed his scars and went about to "kiss them and make them better". Of course all this leading up to foreplay on her part ^_~. Well on to the next chap. |
Reviewed By: Tiffany On: September 14, 2002 23:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"AnOtHeR gReAt StOrY!" I really enjoyed reading this story too, and I like how Vegeta figured the only way he could save Bulma is to lie next to her naked, wink wink ! I Also enjoyed the little war they had of control. hope you continue to write FaNtAsTiC fics! |
