| "Haunting Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: sysaiyan On: May 14, 2004 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was one of the most steameist lemons ive ever read i love it when veggie-chanis all arrogant and sexy still keep writig you should do another chapter
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Reviewed By: Soul Reader On: May 02, 2003 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great stuff!!! |
Reviewed By: Legana On: December 24, 2002 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm...*shuffles on her chair*
nice story...got me all aroused...great writing! I love the way you made Veggie all arrogant and sexy to Bulma, and when they met in the hall way, it was great! I could replace myself so good with Bulma (but she had him and I still didn't *sobs slightly* )
nice =) keep on going with the writing, your lemons are nice, and Vegeta isn't OOC like most V's I read :s |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 14, 2002 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I remember reading this at Lina's site quite a while ago. I love the way you described Bulma's dream and the way she felt after waking up. Yep, that saiyan nose told Veggie all he needed to know ^_~. My favorite line... "Since I was gonna be the star of this little episode anyway, you might as well let me watch". What an arrogant, seductive and kinky bastard. Oh yeah, and he's got a nice (Y) too ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 14, 2002 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow *fans self*, definitely one of the most erotic lemons I've ever read. The way you described the whole thing, step by step, from beginning to completion was...well let me put it to you this way, I've got to go and take a very, long cold shower. But before I do I have to read your other B/V fic that takes place in a cave during a storm ^_~. |
Reviewed By: Tiffany On: September 14, 2002 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Wow!, What a Lemon Fanfic" They get straight to the point ;) I really like how you started the fic. with the dream, and the interuption (he he he, stupid clock always goes off during a good dream, but never during a nightmare). Well, now I'm going to got read your other fic! bye. :) |
