| "Black silk, leather and lace" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just like to say the lemon in this fic is so hard core that I like it and can't wait for more.please write more chapters I really want to know how this is going to turn out.
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Reviewed By: Chibi-chan On: April 17, 2003 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kickass! I LOVED THIS! XD Whoohoo! Tasteful smut! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Omni-sama On: March 09, 2003 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first chapter had me laughing. But in a very good way. Dear god, you've got Aya/Ran's angsty cold bastardness down! XD I just love your take on the bishie redhead! And I can relate to his possessiveness. I get that way too sometimes.
Granted, I usually prefer to have Yohji as seme, but this fic was QUITE enjoyable! Those two alwayws make the best pairing, in my opinion.
Annnyyyywaaaayyy... Just wanted to grace you with the first review I ever made on this particular fanfic archive thing. ^_^;; And tell you just how much I liked your beautiful fic! |
Reviewed By: Jeb On: March 08, 2003 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wha, good shit man, a little less name saying
and it'll be perfect! Write more! |
Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for dangeriously possessive Aya! The fic was awesome... care to write more? I'd really like to read more! It will be fun to see the aftermath of it all and what is still to come. Muwahah! |
Reviewed By: Tsunami On: October 11, 2002 20:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
There's nothing like an angry, possessive Aya/Ran wanting Yohji. ~_^ |
Reviewed By: Aya/Yohji lover On: September 15, 2002 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Drooooooooooools everywhere* First lemon but very good. Aya masterbation, hehehe Rough sex. Yummmmmmmmmmy!!! Please tell me there is more, pleas pleas begging on her knees. I want to know what happens to them afterwards pleas pleas
Great writing btw, I love the way you make Aya out to be a real b*****d. ^_^
Catlin (phoenixen001) |
Reviewed By: Catlin On: September 15, 2002 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*WOW* Powerful and very crude yes, but once you get pass the language just wow. I love Aya being like this, possesive with darling Yohji.
I am on now to read the second part. I like your style of writing and will check out the rest of your fics. ^_~
Catlin (phoenixen001) |
