Reviewed By: CarelessBlue On: October 12, 2002 23:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I normally dislike yuri,scratch that, I hate it. But this was really great!How you described it, it actually made me feel the pain, through all my discomfort. I have to admit the idea of Sammy and Hotaru is pretty cute, I'm surprised I didn't think of it myself. Anyway, Great job!!! |