| "Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2011 14:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the prologue it was great. |
Reviewed By: StarChaser23 On: September 17, 2003 23:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great ending i liked it more than the last. Everyone coming back was a great idea, it made me sad when I thought that Amara and Michelle had died for good. Either way I love all of your stories, you are truly a great writer! |
Reviewed By: al On: July 28, 2003 13:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
coolest vampire sailormoon au fic ever |
Reviewed By: 4EvErC0nFuSeD On: July 25, 2003 19:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! OMG! U G0Tta WrItE MORE!!! WIcKeD kO0l sTOrY!! |
Reviewed By: none On: July 09, 2003 21:24 EDT
Comment/Review:
u know i am not in to reviewing so count this as a prase but u r the devil in with this story just like u r giving us a tase of what to nothing more and i hate that as for none as my nick name i do not have a nick name ok |
Reviewed By: MysticalDr3am3r [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 02:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story. Please keep on updating I can't wait to read what happens next. |
Reviewed By: moonchild On: June 24, 2003 17:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue |
Reviewed By: lita-jupiter On: June 16, 2003 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wright more!! |
Reviewed By: janna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 18:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know that this a serena and rei story,but your
last chapter is hint[that is the way i saw it]that
maybe a tringale is develop between serena/rei/darein.that would be neat even thou
serena will go back to rei.
also love how the vampries are portyal not truly
evil .and the slyers are evil either.
the way i see this story is devlop a cutlute clash. just like the natvie americans and the americans soldiers of the 19 centruy.nither side
can see the other as people who care about life
and thanks for not having darien as monster.just as somebody who is eating by hatred and revenage
for the death of his father.
and what did serena parents do that caused darein to kill them i having trouble accept that
that serena partents got in his way their has to be more to the story than that.
and what dose darein wanted serena for,can serena
have a fling with darein .iknow that serena loves
rei,but i think that would work for the tringale
nice story thank you janna
p.s thank your for truning into a monster just a very confuse and angry man |
Reviewed By: janna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 02:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi
i knowing that this is a rei/serena story.but the
way the last chapter went,could into be truning
into a serena/rei/darien tringale.or a serena/rei/
jedite tringale/i like that the genreals and darein are together. and how your have darein not
as bastrad but as slyer consumed with hatred and
revenge over who killed his parents. but at the same time why did here killed serena parents,i having trouble except that that their got in his way thier has to more to stroy then that.
the slayers can except that vampries are not monster or the vamprie cannot except that the slyers are evil either. alomst like two
cultue crash .almost like how it was the native
americans and the american of the 19 centry.
relly good story please do not turn
darein really nasty, i mean he did not killed the
the vampries that serena was with and he could have i mean their must be some good in him.i know that serena is going to ending up with rei ,but could serena have a fling with darein,and
what dose darein want with serena.
nice story
thank you janna |
Reviewed By: lita-jupiter On: June 16, 2003 01:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please finish!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love vamps. they are awsome!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: shadow_soldier On: January 16, 2003 08:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This story is excellent! and it has my favorite couple! plus vampires! |
Reviewed By: Yuyen On: November 11, 2002 13:24 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hello! I like it so far, but I have just one question? Isn't 10 years old a little too young to be kissing and whatnot? I mean, 10 year olds are not mature enough to have a relationship that deep. They're not even into puberty!!! (This is my opinion anyway, do what you like) other than that, I like it! |
Reviewed By: shader On: October 10, 2002 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FANFIC PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON GOTTA HAVE MORE!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shader On: October 07, 2002 20:40 EDT
Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! i love vampires and anime i wish more pople would think like you hey please write more i love it and maybe i know a suggestion use my faverite 3 villians the amazon trio as slayers maybe |
