| "The Vortex" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: xan_nova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
But it is so long and engrossing. I think the main problem I did have with it is the teenage spasmic behavior.... which is good. I guess it bugs me because I can't stand some teenagers.
None the less... excellent story and I want to read more. |
Reviewed By: Nariko On: November 25, 2001 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this fic! Alternate demension fics are always fun for me to read. ^_^ Good original characters too. Please continue this. |
Reviewed By: Morgana On: September 08, 2001 22:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Alternates between good and kinda tedious. Try to cut down a bit on the fluff and maybe add more actual Pokemon elements. A worthy effort. |
