| "Music of the Night" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: i liked it alot
Reviewed By: LUISA On: July 21, 2005 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
look i have a year waiting for this fic i read on dragonballz romance and other plac es and you never haave the next chappie please dont keep me waiting anyways i liked it alot
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Reviewed By: SnOw MeLoDy On: April 20, 2003 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ur style of writting, spelling and grammar, n creativity is on excellent basis only minor mistakes n some similarities with other fanfics i've read (but tat doesn't mean i accuse u of copying other people's work, no, it's juz there some (few not much) similarities i've found in other fanfics.
I really enjoy reading ur story. Please update soon. N sorry i didn't review on the one u put on FanficNet. (I also agree on their stupidity, sometimes it's annoying) :p.
Well..... keep up the good work.Hope 2 see nex chappy soon. CIAO! :D |
Reviewed By: silver-eyed-Son [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOU REALLY DO ENJOY TORCHURING ME FIRST THIS STORY THEN THE OTHER ON WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got great quality of work! YeY! I made no sense! OK anyway, you better post the next chapter soon! Yes it's an order ;) |
Reviewed By: RisinIndeed [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you stop that was so good. Once I finished with this chapter i sreamed NNNNNNNOOOO Japan Dont do it. I cant help but wonder what Bulma's going to do I bet she feel's really reall stupid. I can feel embarrass for her, standing partly nude in front of him and finding out her's leaveing. Crunch
RisinIndeed
Renee |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter On: September 23, 2002 08:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dammit, i hate cliff hangers. And I totally agree with you about fanfiction.net...they took off my lemons...well...those rate NC-17...i'll get them with a G rated story before i leave...or, if they do decide to stop being jerks, i won't leave and torture them. sigh. |
Reviewed By: DBZ chick [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK! NO! Veggie, can't move to Japan! NOO! Continue you soon! *grumbles 'Fucking FFN! I have to read this story here now!'* |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 22, 2002 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Veggie has to move...bummer. I commend them for having so much restraint (even though Bulma had "plans" to end that). I'm assuming that the lemon to follow will be a form of goodbye (at least for awhile). It's a shame really cause they were starting to get close :(. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 14, 2002 19:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey Trix, glad to see you've decided to post at MMO. Can't say I blame you after FFN pulled that NC-17 crap. I r/r every chap at FFN so I'll pick it up again at #5. TTYL-Sue |
