| "The Fly" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Akira_Nyaag On: September 24, 2004 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very beautiful. Most fics I've read with the same chapter told by two people turn out rather dull and repetative, but the flow you had between each chapter was great. I love the Knives/Legato pairing, and this fic was done wonderfully for these two. Marvolous job!
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Reviewed By: SB On: September 22, 2003 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
@______@ ahhh i think im going to cry This was such a beautiful fic. So angsty i dont know who i feel more sorry for....=*( pooor legato...and poor messed up knivesu...@_@
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Reviewed By: Azur On: June 24, 2003 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was great. I am truely in awe.. |
Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2002 04:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Clever idea here, and good execution. A really well written story, and a rather original portrayl of the Knives x Legato pairing.
The symmetry was amazing, and the last lines from each chapter together are amazing.
I think I liked the Knives chapter more. More powerful, more explanitory. Also, Knives' mind are waters less tread, and I was inttrigued by your portrayal of their contents.
Good work, here. |
Reviewed By: Claudia On: November 01, 2002 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, this was a good fic. I read it three or four times just because the symmetry and symbolism gave me goosebumps. READ THIS FIC!! |
Reviewed By: sylus On: October 07, 2002 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the fic exept for the fact that knives hurt legato, but thats my problem. it was a good fic and i hope to read more of you stuff. |
Reviewed By: dragon88 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2002 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^ I love this fic. It's a really good one! ^_____________^ I love KnivesxLegato pairings. I think that's honestly the only *true* yaoi pairing. ^____^ |
