| "The Moon Travelers" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Hope_Poe26 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm in shock.
I really liked your story, but I'm either wondering if you are really trying to torture the readers to review or because that's your way of writing. I hope that you really do what you said, which is a sequel. How come I never saw that story on mediaminer.org before?! It's pretty damn good. Anyway... is Trunks dead or what?! |
Reviewed By: bachnelkenwurz On: January 19, 2003 11:19 CST
Comment/Review:
You're so evil!!!! To stop when it gets most interesting. I have to know why Trunks left him, because I'm of the same opinion as Goten. He can take care of himself, so why?! Maybe it would be nice in your sequel (don't forget you promised it) that he gets into contact with his family again. And I like Curtis and Angelo, so I hope those little nasty boys are aswell in your sequel. There's just one thing I found a little bit akward. Veilchen Reiter? I mean Reiter is ok, but for me as a native german speaker Veilchen as a first name sounds terrible. I hpe there' no one who's named Veilchen. (I think you know it's a little blue flower.)
But except this little and unimportant detail it's a great story and I'm looking forward to reading more. |
Reviewed By: Roshy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic!! please put the next chapter out soon!! i'm dying to see what happens next...-luv Roshy- |
Reviewed By: CherryKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! i love this fic, please continue! |
