| "A Twist of Fait" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 07:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, this wasn't too bad! I know this is one of your first fics, so that's ok... but if you haven't already, maybe get a beta reader? They help loads, and you won't lose marks on the grammer and spelling. Other than that I truely did enjoy this fic... I don't read much digimon, but this one had intrigued me. Keep going, don't let this stop you! You have great ideas, go with them!
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Reviewed By: Yaoi_Dude On: April 23, 2004 11:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great. For me it's ranked up there with "I saw you dancing in the gym" (one of my other favorite digimon fics)
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Reviewed By: ruddykitty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2003 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a pretty good fic and I enjoyed reading it. But in the future, please check your spelling and grammar. Some parts were confusing because of this. It will turn people away from your writing and it makes the story look bad. I will have to agree with starcrest on this one, sorry. |
Reviewed By: starcrest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2003 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
You *really* need to work on your grammar. I'm sure I'm not the only one who turns from a fanfiction because of bad grammar, but seriously, it's a big turnoff, and not many people will want to read it. Sorry. |
