| "Heart's Treason" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Omega Nazo On: March 18, 2003 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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I think I'm gonna cry.... |
Reviewed By: Aria On: January 24, 2003 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Llewlyn,
This fic is rated an overall ten. When I finished reading this fic I wanted to rate it a 1 and a 10 at the same time. This is the first fic I have ever read, out of hundreds that has made me actually cry. A few have gotten me teary-eyed but in this one I was actually crying. It is a beautiful story that I love dearly. I will never forget having read this story ever. The emotion you put into this story was fantastic. I hope you continue to write for as long as you live, because you have an exceptional gift. (I just hope you have more happy endings^_^) This story has been a true treat to read, and if you ever get this message I hope you take my advice and keep writing forever.
Thank You,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Tobe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well...I happened to like this story up until the end. I thought he was actually coming back by chance. I don't like stories that end like that. Makes me sad. But your story is really good. I'm just sensitive to umm...(I'm trying not to give anything away here)...when people go "bye bye". Anyway I'm just an emotional person I guess. But hey, hehe, keep writing...your good at it!
Thanks,
Tobe |
Reviewed By: darkmus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2002 16:41 CST
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He he! I loved it!!!
Especially the names... o__O`` (Tristan Bland, Officer Prick... lol!!! =__=) And reference to the *good* Star Wars movie... ^___^````
Wonderful writing skills. The only problem is the slight OOC... (though, no one can really write a perfect "so-and-so") the one that bothered me most was Wufei saying "gladly" (o__O`) But that's just me. ^___^```
I don't really go for anything that isn't Heero and Duo, but this is really well done. 3X6... never thought of that... It's one of those "out-there" pairings, and done very well. ^__^ |
Reviewed By: ShadeAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 11:29 CDT
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You killed Trowa?! How could you do that to poor Milli? I'm gonna go bawl now... Anyways, great fic! ^_______^ I don't think I've ever seen this pairing and though I'm a bit of a 3x4 nut usually I loved it. |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2002 23:08 CDT
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Where'd I miss that?!? Eep!! Thanks for telling me, now I'm going to go find it and change it! |
Reviewed By: Dewshine On: September 17, 2002 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, very cool! Great fic! I don't usually see 3x6/6x3 fics, and I like 'em. Kudos! I loved it. Just one thing... Trowa is Pilot 03, not 04. Quatre is 04. Other than that, it was great!
I hope you write more 6x3!! (3x6 too.. ^_~;;;) |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm, I wrote it so... my opinion... my best fic ever IMHO. |
