| "Forbidden Love" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Blue-eyed Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 06:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*GASPS!* Please! Pretty please continue this fic... I just cant stand the suspense! I just love it when everybody is after Ran!!! :D
|
Title: More?
Reviewed By: Simon Erif [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 07:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh come on you can't leave it like that!! I want to know what will happen next. Will Aya(Ran) be forsed to silence Yohji to make sure his secret is safe? Will Brad be mad? What will Bad do? Will Yohji find out the whole truth? What What What??? Please continue!!
|
Reviewed By: LysS [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 00:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good story line...wish you would update soon. I like Cherish me also. Please don't leave us hanging. Thanx
|
Reviewed By: Akurei13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 22:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Youji, he has no idea that Aya/Ran is fucking Crawford behind Weiss' back. Good story, update soon! |
Reviewed By: Laguna chan On: April 03, 2003 20:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Brad x Aya and Youji x Aya ne?
good one ^-* what gonna happen when Youji finds out :P
please updated soon ok
make more triangle love ok ^-* |
Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: February 19, 2003 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh Sardius please GO ON with this fic....the Brad x Ran lemon was BREATHTAKING^^ (again...I know^^)....and the last scene where Aya dropped the pot....I like such scenes^^...how embarrassing^^....plllleeeeeaaaaseeeee next chap next chap^^!!!!
Ja *next next next*
Koji-chan |
Reviewed By: Krimstorm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very good, very intriguing, I would love to read more. |
Reviewed By: mysticblood On: November 07, 2002 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
love the storyline...hmmm, did Schu do mess with poor Aya's memories?...well,I am sure you will inform us later..can't wait to find out...please update this story soon |
Reviewed By: Nagikins [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 12:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh this is really good. I like the Brad/Aya...but I'm wondering why Aya is with Brad and how he met him....I guess I'll have to wait until you write more to find out. ^_^ I like it please continue. |
