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| "Zerbrechliche Seele (Fragile Soul)" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: shadowlink06 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My gosh, you made Schu into a sadistic, ruthless, cruel, and otherwise evil person! I LOVED it ^_^
| Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2002 10:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, Aya at his best. At least, Schuldig managed to break him. It would be so nice to make Aya accept the help of his friends, but that would be to un-Aya like, wouldn't it? Good story. Very good. I feared for the Weiß boys when they got caught but there is always an Omi to hid some bombs. *g* | Reviewed By: okiayu_kaori [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed what we were able to see of Youji's feelings for Aya -- I guess the filthy part of me wanted to see Youji have a little fun on his own, thinking of Aya, but it's understandable if he wouldn't simply because he was worried about him.
The enjoyment factor shot right up with the way that you wrote Brad -- some of his lines had me laughing out loud, for real. XD He was SO fun to see! I learned a little more about Schuldich from this 'fic, and for that I thank you. Good job covering *every* *single* *character* in your story, something I haven't done yet.
I will be reading more! ^_~ Wonderful job. |
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