| "History repeats itself... does it?" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: INUYOKIA87
Reviewed By: INUYOKIA87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good but I don't guess you'll finish it........damn.
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Reviewed By: IlonaAutumn On: February 25, 2004 19:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow! I really like this so far! You kept D in character while also performing a really good scene with the man in the stables...that was very interesting!
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Reviewed By: Piccolo'sVampire Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 02:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: TheKuroNeko On: July 20, 2003 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a little confused about what is going on. Who summoned D? What is he hunting? What is the name is the town? Why did he go to the stable? Why is everyone freaking out?
I think there are a lot of holes so far in your story. I can't really get a feel for what D is up to, and the chapters don't really flow together. I feel like I am picking up a different story each time I switch pages.
Your concept is good, but you need to use more descriptive words, and explain the surroundings/plot better. If you try a little harder I bet you can make this the story you want. |
Reviewed By: werecow On: September 25, 2002 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wahh! i want it to go on!! more i say!!! lol this was actually a pretty good fic! i rather thought it would be kinda sappy and pathetic when i started reading it but i was pleasently surpirsed!!! V. good wrk! i like where this is going!!! ^_^ |
