| "Loving Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Wahhhhh!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's so so beautiful! I love Goku to death! Nice calm unabashed portrayal of Chichi as well.
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Reviewed By: Karen On: April 07, 2003 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOw!it's great, although,I kind of had my own vision of how Goten was conceived,I'm too lazy to write a story about it.But your point of view is better than what I had in mind.I love the way you wrote it in Chi-Chi's POV.now I kind of feel sorry for her. |
Reviewed By: digibitch [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for writing a Goku/Chichi lemon! Those are so hard to find - especially one written as beautifully as this.
I find it hard to write in the first person, which is why I gave you such high marks. Keep writing like this and you will go very far with your writing! |
