| "The Mistakes We Make" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: neo-chan On: May 23, 2005 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this should be highly distributed to show off what REAL talent is. I've read this before many times, and reviewed it on fanfiction.net back in the day, and I even remember e-mailing you and sounding like a crazy person... but I just had to review it again here because you just deserve it so much. This is one of the few fics that I can say I'm sure I'll remember forever. So I'll stop babbling now, and I forgot what I meant to say in the first place, just that this is the only Kaizersuke fic, or even Kensuke fic, that I've actually intended to read and loved it with a passion. Nothing can compare.
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Reviewed By: Tao Jun knife thrower On: July 11, 2004 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD omg it was so so so good....but you shoulda made Takeru his slave to....^^; me and my seryusly fucked up mind, anyway iv seen a pic that would fit this fic really well if you hadda slaved Takeru.....
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Reviewed By: Demo On: September 10, 2003 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are no words in the English language that would come close to doing justice to this story. Your description, detail, insight.. all of it is just so perfect. The Kaizer's observations, the truth in his views, and his dark and twisted sense of logic is wonderful. Daisuke's slow conversion, his submission, and the look into his mind is genious. The whole thing is brilliant. I just want to close by saying thank you for this superb piece of writing. I will adore it for time to come. |
Reviewed By: neon On: June 15, 2003 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is addictive....I tried to pull away from the screen several times but i couldnt (i probably dont have 20/20 vision anymore). Do you know exactly how crazy i am over this fic? i printed it out (took me TONS of paper) and made it into a paper book.... |
Reviewed By: Kat On: January 27, 2003 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gullible, gullible me. To think I was actually expecting a happy ending. This ends in a nice original twist compared to the other Kaisukes.
But, good lord, this is one of the darkest and most twisted fiction I have ever had the pleasure to read.
I love it. |
Reviewed By: sailor_soldier_sm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't help but love this fic! It is so well done, and it has enough underlying love/need between Daisuke and the Kaizer, no matter how dark, to make it appeal to me along with the amazingly disturbing parts.
I was going to use my usual plea of 'more Please' but you specifically said 'there will be no more' so... *sad sigh*
Well, I look forward to reading more of your work. *clicks submit then clicks on your user name in search of new kaizer/daisuke goodness'
Tongari ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sairisu On: December 02, 2002 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is probably my 20th time reading this. o_O; I still wub this fic. *bows* You're still one of my favorite authors, blessed with true talent, indeed. ^___^ 'Dios. |
Reviewed By: AshenKoneko On: November 17, 2002 07:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waii~~!! I luv this fic...it's so great. I was so pissed off at the other digidestined people when they took Daisuke away from Ken.....I get to involved in the story ^^;;;; But anyway...it was a wonderful story, the detail was good, the character interaction was good, everything about it was good. |
Reviewed By: Ashna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first fic/story I have every read that just completely absolutly drove me crazy while reading it.
To top it off you ended it in one of the most intelegent ways I have ever seen.
Your wonderful for getting into the characters heads. In an unusual situation.
I'd say more but my vocab doesn't cover it.
Can't wait to see more of your writting. |
Reviewed By: Empress of the Eclipse [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grin* I've read this before and it's still hideous and twisted and disgusting...some things just don't change do they? *laughs* But there is a difference for now I CAN LEGALLY READ THIS FANFICTION! TREMBLE FOR I AM SEVENTEEN TODAY! *laughs*
Okay, I liked it. It was cool. Poor random personages. I feel sorry for EVERYONE in this fic - it's one of those things! |
Reviewed By: DarkSakura [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2002 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very twisted, and well written. You have a gift for sharing the characters' perspectives. |
Reviewed By: Daremyth [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2002 17:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is SICK!! disgustingly, horrifyingly... SICK!! ::blink:: ::pause:: I like it! ^.^ it's awesome. I wish you'd write more, but... you said not to bother, so I won't. ^.^
-Daremyth |
Reviewed By: herongale On: September 20, 2002 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You get an 9 for enjoyment because...well, you know. Sometimes you made me cry.
Bastard.
Anyway, I can't imagine that you don't have every single clue as too how much I like this story, but it's worth pointing out to all of the teeming masses who might be reading this that I lovethis story. I am rightfully disturbed by this story, but I love it nonetheless. You are amazing, amazing, amazing! |
Reviewed By: Taichi Ishida [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2002 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! *drools* This is the 3rd time. I’ve read this fic. It keeps on getting better and better each time I read it. ^^ Go Kinslayer!!! I know you’ve probably heard this a million times already, but…
I’m absolutely crazy about your fics! ^^; *sweatdrops* this would be about the point where I beg you to continue, but since you’ve clearly stated, “No.” …..Please oh Please write another fic! ^;^ When your new fic comes out I'll be there waiting impatiently to snatch it hot off the press.
Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Kaoru On: December 15, 2002 13:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first Digimon fanfiction I have ever read. Since I had only seen one or two episodes of the show, I was under the impression it was a Pokemon-like kids show. But I think you have converted me. Not only do I want to watch the series now, I also want to get my hands on other fanfics regarding the series. Very well done, and keep up the good work! |
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