"The Mistakes We Make" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: EDragonPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 19:24 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG. I can't believe what I just read. That was the most......................................................AMAZING THING EVER! And trust me, I'm not a normal yaoi fan, but this, I cloudn't get my mind off of it! I was even thinking about it the whole day I was at school! It was brilliant, flauless, and most of all, it had a great plot. It even got to the point where I wanted to jump in and help Takeru beat the grud out of Ken! Can't wait to read more of you fics.
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Reviewed By: EDragonPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 19:23 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG. I can't believe what I just read. That was the most......................................................AMAZING THING EVER! And trust me, I'm not a normal yaoi fan, but this, I cloudn't get my mind off of it! I was even thinking about it the whole day I was at school! It was brilliant, flauless, and most of all, it had a great plot. It even got to the point where I wanted to jump in and help Takeru beat the grud out of Ken! Can't wait to read more of you fics.
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Reviewed By: EDragonPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 19:22 CST Comment/Review: OMG. I can't believe what I just read. That was the most......................................................AMAZING THING EVER! And trust me, I'm not a normal yaoi fan, but this, I cloudn't get my mind off of it! I was even thinking about it the whole day I was at school! It was brilliant, flauless, and most of all, it had a great plot. It even got to the point where I wanted to jump in and help Takeru beat the grud out of Ken! Can't wait to read more of you fics.
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Reviewed By: EDragonPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 19:22 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG. I can't believe what I just read. That was the most......................................................AMAZING THING EVER! And trust me, I'm not a normal yaoi fan, but this, I cloudn't get my mind off of it! I was even thinking about it the whole day I was at school! It was brilliant, flauless, and most of all, it had a great plot. It even got to the point where I wanted to jump in and help Takeru beat the grud out of Ken! Can't wait to read more of you fics.
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Reviewed By: LanHikari2000x [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 22:17 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was amazing! Between the Kaiser's logic and that video we watched in English a few months ago that made me question my free-will(mail me if you want the details, I don't feel like explaining it right now), I think my outlook on life has been completely turned around. I absolutly love that kind of psycological stuff, that and the dark parts(the slave/master relationship, the torture sceens, etc) added up to a combination that I just couldn't put down(figurativly speaking, of course), and I actually read this whole thing is one sitting.
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Title: Holy Shitting Fuck Reviewed By: Kiora On: June 01, 2005 22:33 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This fic has disturbed me greatly... But it's the good kind of disturbing. I really like how this makes me think, all of the Kaiser's twisted logic, and the way he bends Daisuke's mind to fit his own needs... it gives me shivers. But they're the GOOD kind of shivers. You are amazing and a god/goddess (^^;) among writers. I'd print this out, but, you know... there's the whole "Parent" things. ^^ Which reminds me, I better go erase the website history on my computer...! I love you and your writing!
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Reviewed By: neo-chan On: May 23, 2005 12:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I think this should be highly distributed to show off what REAL talent is. I've read this before many times, and reviewed it on fanfiction.net back in the day, and I even remember e-mailing you and sounding like a crazy person... but I just had to review it again here because you just deserve it so much. This is one of the few fics that I can say I'm sure I'll remember forever. So I'll stop babbling now, and I forgot what I meant to say in the first place, just that this is the only Kaizersuke fic, or even Kensuke fic, that I've actually intended to read and loved it with a passion. Nothing can compare.
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Title: XD Reviewed By: Tao Jun knife thrower On: July 11, 2004 19:04 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: XD omg it was so so so good....but you shoulda made Takeru his slave to....^^; me and my seryusly fucked up mind, anyway iv seen a pic that would fit this fic really well if you hadda slaved Takeru.....
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Reviewed By: Demo On: September 10, 2003 19:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: There are no words in the English language that would come close to doing justice to this story. Your description, detail, insight.. all of it is just so perfect. The Kaizer's observations, the truth in his views, and his dark and twisted sense of logic is wonderful. Daisuke's slow conversion, his submission, and the look into his mind is genious. The whole thing is brilliant. I just want to close by saying thank you for this superb piece of writing. I will adore it for time to come. |
Reviewed By: neon On: June 15, 2003 14:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is addictive....I tried to pull away from the screen several times but i couldnt (i probably dont have 20/20 vision anymore). Do you know exactly how crazy i am over this fic? i printed it out (took me TONS of paper) and made it into a paper book.... |
Reviewed By: Kat On: January 27, 2003 20:39 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Gullible, gullible me. To think I was actually expecting a happy ending. This ends in a nice original twist compared to the other Kaisukes.
But, good lord, this is one of the darkest and most twisted fiction I have ever had the pleasure to read.
I love it. |
Reviewed By: sailor_soldier_sm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 22:44 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I can't help but love this fic! It is so well done, and it has enough underlying love/need between Daisuke and the Kaizer, no matter how dark, to make it appeal to me along with the amazingly disturbing parts.
I was going to use my usual plea of 'more Please' but you specifically said 'there will be no more' so... *sad sigh*
Well, I look forward to reading more of your work. *clicks submit then clicks on your user name in search of new kaizer/daisuke goodness'
Tongari ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sairisu On: December 02, 2002 20:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is probably my 20th time reading this. o_O; I still wub this fic. *bows* You're still one of my favorite authors, blessed with true talent, indeed. ^___^ 'Dios. |
Reviewed By: AshenKoneko On: November 17, 2002 07:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Waii~~!! I luv this fic...it's so great. I was so pissed off at the other digidestined people when they took Daisuke away from Ken.....I get to involved in the story ^^;;;; But anyway...it was a wonderful story, the detail was good, the character interaction was good, everything about it was good. |
Reviewed By: Ashna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 21:44 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is the first fic/story I have every read that just completely absolutly drove me crazy while reading it.
To top it off you ended it in one of the most intelegent ways I have ever seen.
Your wonderful for getting into the characters heads. In an unusual situation.
I'd say more but my vocab doesn't cover it.
Can't wait to see more of your writting. |
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