| "That Kind of Fun" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadow On: January 31, 2003 12:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! that was great! u need a creative idea? Whip cream, strawberries and chocolate syrup in the living room. Kan and Omi are out grocery shopping. hehehe i can be sooooooooo evil. You need to finish this story so i can read more K? k. |
Reviewed By: kamibukurosama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 12:44 CST
Comment/Review:
You NEVER need an excuse for yummy smut! XD Wonderful things like that happen on their own circumstances. Write more, ne?
kami-chan |
Reviewed By: ksya-chan On: January 28, 2003 18:45 CST
Comment/Review:
GASP!!!!!!!!Oh mY god!!!! THAT IS SOOO GOOD!!! I absoulteley love this story!!! a nice put together smut! Well done. Now, get to work ! ^_^ *giggle*
^_~ |
Reviewed By: Talyssa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 02:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Slave driver! here's your review! Blergh! anyway, two more parts sounds okay but on the other hand it doesn't really matter if you include another pwp in this series or just write some other ones. But you know, those bitch boots you mentioned? Yeah. Thats a good idea. I like that one. Just the boots. ^_^ or heck the nakedness. There could be a story with lots of naked aya all over a fairly large area.....and for some reason yohji can't get naked too....or something. O_o I dunno, just do your thing, it'll be fun no matter what. |
Reviewed By: Akari-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 00:18 CST
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Yummy! :D
As much as I've been enjoying the pure smut a bit of romance is always nice too. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: LondonMyst [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 19:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this fic. I wanna see more of Aya naked. |
Reviewed By: LondonMyst [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 19:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this fic. I wanna see more of Aya naked. |
Reviewed By: Aisha_Max [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 17:26 CST
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Yay! You updated! I detected a slight tone of sentiment in Youji at the end. It was good. It wasn't to much to were it complicates the story or interfere with the lemony goodness but added a little something to it. I'm really glad you updated! Please write more soon! |
Reviewed By: shinigamiNC17 On: December 07, 2002 20:35 CST
Comment/Review:
okay, i'll put it this way....
YOU ROCK!
here's one, why not have them be in a tub with a showerhead...shower gets a little hot and heavy, tub gets the plug in, and they slide down the wall into the tub that is rabbidly filling up with water from the shower. switch off the shower, climax in the tub.
^___~
just a thought.
I |
Reviewed By: Krimstorm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 15:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Mmmmmmmmm, you want a review eh? How about this time we have a very embarrassed 'Ken' walking in on our favorite couple this time, Hm? Or how about our lovely little Aya turns it around and uses some sweet food products on a very helpless Youji? Just some of the suggestions, you asked for.
Anyway love the fic so far, I did my part let's hope other people do theirs. ;) |
Reviewed By: ladyflame [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like, I like, more please...
bath or shower, I have no preference, baths are messier though all that water sloshing about |
Reviewed By: plutosring On: October 13, 2002 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty little creatures. you need to find yourself an editor though. ::smiles:: very pretty creatures indeed, oh, and i like them better sans clothing as well. |
Reviewed By: May On: October 12, 2002 05:13 CDT
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I want mooooore! It's so funny!!! I'm looking foraward to read more!! please!!! |
Reviewed By: Stephanie On: October 07, 2002 13:20 CDT
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Very nice fic. Please continue writing, it's wonderful. |
Reviewed By: May On: October 20, 2002 15:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mooooore! i need more!*smile*
I'm looking foraward for it! |
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