| "gohan and 18's love war" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: D On: May 04, 2003 22:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
macke it a seres |
Reviewed By: Nikita On: March 15, 2003 10:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rape is a bad thing, but using it in fics isn't always a crime as people sometimes state. I really want you to continue this story!!!! Everytime something happens in tbis fic and it's very interesting. I hope you will not discontinue this fic because of lack of reviews, cause there are people who like it, such as myself, so CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: dude On: January 24, 2003 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
why dont they just wish away the baby with the dragonball?oh yea ur storie blow |
Reviewed By: some1 On: January 24, 2003 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make him have tentacles million of them raping her hahahaha |
Reviewed By: Cyber Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2002 21:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please I hope that you continue this fanfic series. I happen to like 18 |
Reviewed By: Jet_Black On: September 16, 2002 19:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Was that the end? if so...good job dude(or dudeette) |
