| "18 and trunks?" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: well done
Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 04:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome. i hope you write more stories. one thing i dont get though. what did she wish for? other then that. that was realy good. ^_^ i also liked how you kept the characters how they are sapposed to be.
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Reviewed By: YouakiKaji On: July 30, 2004 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, that was a really good story! I just wonder what happened to android 18's wish with the dragon balls.
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Reviewed By: Cat's eye On: March 14, 2004 09:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good except that u forgot to put the last wish for 18
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Reviewed By: Demetz On: January 31, 2003 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very good, and I would love to read more of this story. If you have already continued, or are thinking about it, please do so as soon as possible. |
Reviewed By: Maria S. On: January 20, 2003 10:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok All I can say is please don't let Seventeen be one of the bad guy he loves his sister verry much he would never do anything to hurt her. |
Reviewed By: Trunks' girl On: January 19, 2003 14:21 CST
Comment/Review:
I think this is brill but im a Trunks lover and a 18 hater. Even though i like it i dont like the idea of Trunks being with 18. Other than that its really good. |
Reviewed By: david paz On: September 19, 2002 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i think this fix is very interesting, and i understood everything about it. |
