Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED THE CHAPTER!! ^^
SOo cool!!!
Loved the Fight with the blue bird thingy!!
And the beginning was cute!!
Shin must have been getting pissed....
oh well....at least they aren't doing it on God's Planet!! ^^
CONTINUE CONTINUE I SAY!!
oh and for ideas?? I dunno......they have to fight their greatest fear or something?? (but like, it's not really happening.....maybe mentuall or mirage kinda thing)
And Vegeta's something like....GOku kidnapping Bulma..I dunno....this is off the top of my brain.....not sooo great, cause I just came back from skool. :S CONTINUE SOON!! THIS STORY IS GREAT!! ^^ |
