Reviewed By: Cherry Blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2002 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually hate reading first person p.o.v.'s but you captured Duo's narrative voice and character quite nicely in this fic. It was funny, different, and most importantly, not dragging or weighed down with unimportant detail like I've seen a lot of p.o.v.'s do before.
Good job. I should like to see more.
Cherry Blossom |
