| "Path of Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: axel720 On: July 04, 2005 23:39 EDT
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yeh that was a long wait o.o but worth it i guess^^ lol ayame is so cool XD please update soon!
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Reviewed By: blackshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update again soon please!
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Reviewed By: Rhiara (not signed in) On: July 03, 2005 11:20 EDT
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WOOOOOOOT!!!! I loved this chapter! Here is Haichu, as promised. I liked the interaction between Ayame and Aeris, and now I'm itching to know more about Adrean.... Now I just gotta wait until your NEXT update which hopefully won't be as long a wait as this one!
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Reviewed By: Rhiara [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 13:10 EDT
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UPDAAAAAAATE!!!!!!! PLEEEEEEASE!!! I will give you..... ummmm... pocky? Panda candy? Nah but seriously, I adore this fic, and I'm hankering for some more! It's really well written, and even being a grammar nazi I hardly found any mistakes in that department at all. I like how it follows the thread of the game so closely but doesn't interfere with it at all. All in all, me likey a lot. SO UPDATE! ...please? I know what I'll offer! Haichu!! Have you ever had this, the GOD of all Japanese Candy? Grape is the best flavor. Trust me, once you've had haichu...nothing will ever be the same again... MUAHAHAH (sorry, it's 3 in the morning... not good time...)
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Reviewed By: yo-yo On: June 16, 2005 20:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the love of god update soon!
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Reviewed By: devildice708(not logged in) On: May 16, 2005 11:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sephiroth...seductive...? Never heard of that! This is a really cool story. I plan to read more of this.
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Reviewed By: chocolate button On: May 04, 2005 05:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So what's he going to do? Plan another seduction i hope
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Reviewed By: Fallenrose On: April 20, 2005 10:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thatlast chapter was great. Just thinking of Seph trying to explain an emotion that until now was alien to him is just brilliant. I wonder how he's going to tell Aeris his feelings? I'm sure there will be some seduction and lovin'first though.
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Title: Awesome Work
Reviewed By: InuZWMN729 On: April 11, 2005 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story. I can't wait for you to update it. I've always been a big believer on the Aeris/Sephiroth together-ness. Keep up the good work, and keep it coming!!
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Reviewed By: Mai24 On: April 10, 2005 22:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS GREEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAT! I've been following the story for a while- can't remember if I've reviewed though.... I'd left off somewhere around C9 or something But I've spent the last day or so rrading the rest and I think this fic is awesome! Aris kicks ass! Tifa gets a life! Cloud's a dunce but is still funny! BArret isn't a complete jerk! And Cid...well, Cid should get his ass whooped by all the girls at once and learn some manners. :)Vince hasn't played a large part yet, but I like the friendship Red has w/ everyone. And I laughed my ass off at the things Jenova has been saying since the Canyon. I always saw her as that evil bitch that you want to kill off ASAP; but here I think she's more of a crazy aunt-type figure you want to gag every once in a while. She still has to die, and Seph has to live tho. I'll comment now on ur writting style: Jenova's changed A LOT- from bitch to aunt & Seph's tuened into a stumbling 16 yr old. I like it all the same, but it seems to have lost a bit of the maturity from previous chaps. I don't know if it's b/c he feels boyish b/c of the love or b/c he's suddenly comfortable with the crowd but it's nice. Don't stray too far from the original flow or it'll turn bad, and in a fic as good as this one it would be a crying shame to see happen. Much love and luck, Mai ^___^
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Reviewed By: axel720 On: April 09, 2005 04:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome chappy^^ i like this ayame character, she's teaching seph to be a good boy =P lol i could tell you were struggling to keep seph..well, seph! but you pulled it off with another extremely enjoyable read^^ *cant wait for the next update*
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Title: heehee
Reviewed By: chibichibikawaii *2 lazy 2 login* On: April 08, 2005 20:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea, I got beef with this chapter......tee hee j/k!! I just wanted to sound madd gansta!! yo!! (wow, that was wierd....) great chapter, just like all the others (i dont expect any less!!) but I hope the next chapter has a A/S get together.....I'm missing my lovely couple in action.... continue soon!!
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Title: *~*WOW*~*
Reviewed By: Seline_Saddern On: April 04, 2005 13:06 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE your fanfictions period, but this is by far the best you've written. Your doing a wonderful job, personally I love Chappy 22 were he finally realizes he is in love and falls down. XD
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Reviewed By: axel720 On: April 02, 2005 22:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE this chapter^^ better than the last one too XD LOVE the cliffhanger too, and its about time seph figured it out =P cant wait till you update!
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Reviewed By: rhiara_123@hotmail.com On: March 31, 2005 08:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it!! I just spent all day reading it from beginning to end...PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! I love this story!!
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