| "The Power of the Full Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: The Power Of The Full Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter? Can the pairing be Pan and Trunks please?
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 06:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh!!! A Goku lemon!! *Big, happy grin* I love the Sons - they need to get a bigger share of the lemon tree...
Oh, sweet, sexy Goku - almost as delicious as his glorious, yummy father... *sigh*
Will there be more Son lemons from you in the future?? (Pretty, pretty please - *bats eyelashes*) |
Reviewed By: cuttie_blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!! plz u have 2 u have 2!! update but u could take a break of coarse! |
Reviewed By: Faen On: April 07, 2003 15:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for updating! I can't wait until the Bulma/Vegeta chapter, they are my favorite couple. Well, I hope that you update soon! |
Reviewed By: Animechick [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this fic. The only thing though, is that you've used the exact idea for all of your lemons. They're all basically the same and barely any differences. It was still good though and I hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow fantasic |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow all of my fav couples. lol keep this going this is a great fic keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: cuttie_blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write the pan and trunks lemon please!! i love both of them!! please!! i love u'r stories!! |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: September 30, 2002 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
goku and chi-chi definately...and as for the first chapter, i knew it wasn't v/b, because bulma can't fly |
Reviewed By: digibitch [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 20:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I forgot to tell you why I rated you such. Sorry.
I gave you a 9 for style because that I thought you had good wording for certain "areas", though you seemed to overuse the word "minx".
Your spelling and grammar were pretty good, there was one spot though where I got confused who was speaking, though. You did good, so I gave you an 8.
This was pretty original, the way you wrote this at least. So it desrved a 10.
I normally don't seek out one-shot type lemons so for me to read both chapters of this means that i thought it was good. A 10. ^_^
Overall, this was good. 10! Write more and add Goku/Chichi and Trunks/Pan! |
Reviewed By: digibitch [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Intense! Write Goku/Chi-chi and Trunks/Pan! I love those couples! |
Reviewed By: fanfic Lover On: September 18, 2002 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I hate what they did in FF.net to. There was some great fics on there that i really loved and wanted to finish reading. I say we all email them and tell them that it's not fair. I was going to put a fic on there too. It's just not fair. Your story is creative and enjoyable. You really had me fooled with the first chap. I thought is was Vegeta. I had to blink twice we she said Gohan. |
