| "Genetic Lessons" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: ctt On: December 13, 2002 08:29 CST
Comment/Review:
It's very interesting. Original in its own right. Keep it up, although I think you have to fix it a bit. It seems a little choppy, especially when you began running down on the events that were shown in the anime in a 1st person view. Aside from this, I'm really looking forward to an update. |
Reviewed By: asuka On: September 21, 2002 09:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
beatiful piece of prose. i keep reading again and again. doesn't seem to be very popular, but i'm confident that it'll rise up in fame.potiential here... haha... i sound like an old prof... first speaker... |
Reviewed By: Rei Inverse On: September 17, 2001 19:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
please fix the TXT format. it is a little to wide and I have to move the windo to read the longer lines. decrease the TExt with. |
Reviewed By: Lilly On: September 21, 2001 21:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
very well made fanfic |
