| "Runaway" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 17:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow! Chi Chi's pregnant...Hmmm...I wonder who the daddy is! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: October 31, 2002 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please try not to swear to much it ruins the story. And YOU spell "too the store"
its suppose to be..."to the store"
Get my idia? |
Reviewed By: Heikgan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool you updated now you've got me as a fan im not sure if thats a good or bad thing *lol* any way love the new chappy pwease update as in soon! or you know when ever you feel like it ^_^
Ja 'Ne
.... for now |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: September 29, 2002 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well...i for one would like another chapter or 2 or 3 or 4...in other words...i like it! |
Reviewed By: Sk8nBaBe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2002 18:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it update soon : ) |
Reviewed By: Heikgan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2002 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
defanlty a keeper please update soon i like it's originalty never thought Bulma would fail her GCSE's it's great UPDATE SOON! okay
^_^
Ja 'Ne |
Reviewed By: Dark lilly On: November 10, 2002 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! cool^^ i wanna read more, pleases. i just love it^^
~Dill |
