| "Changing Visions" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Little_Manga_Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best Lemons I have ever read ;-) LMN |
Reviewed By: Yami Asefe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 05:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good, plus I have not read a lemon in ages so I was really happy to read one as good as yours. |
Reviewed By: clairekygal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2002 11:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Terrific story! It was very well-written as well, unlike a lot of the NC-17 fics, unfortunately. :( Anyway, keep 'em coming, and I know I'll keep reading 'em, as will a lot of other people too, I'm sure! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Dragon Master Duelist On: October 26, 2002 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU MADE THEM GAY! THATS THE ONLY PROBLEM I SEE. |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam On: October 18, 2002 12:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
HELLLO!!! WEN ARE YOU GONNA RITE DA NXT CHAPTER!!! WEN DA HELL WILL YAMI GET WOT HE WANTED IN DA END!!! AND Y DA HELL AM I USING CAPITAL LETTERS AND EXCLAMATIONS MARKS!!?!?!?!?
Yami: *bluntly* Cos ur Madyamisam
I KNOW DAT!!! I MAYBE INSANE BUT I'M NOT STUPID!!! *hammers him on the floor with 1000 tonne mallet* (@~@) |
Reviewed By: Zheryta On: October 12, 2002 14:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue. I'm gonna be board out of my mind soon if someone doesn't continue because FFNet is having a maintenance thingy and it won't come back till tomorrow. There's not much here, but the authors do a great job. |
Reviewed By: ryoubakurafan013 On: October 02, 2002 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, Starry! I'm glad that I can still read your story on MM.org. It's too bad FF.net took all the NC-17s away. If it's possible, put up another chapter! |
Reviewed By: Sabs On: October 05, 2002 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I really liked your fic, and i'm so glad i can read it even though you're taking it off of FF.net. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: YamiKitty On: September 20, 2002 18:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved it. ^-^
I've been DYING for some Yami+Yugi for awhile now... I hope you get around to making a 4th chapter... ^-^; |
Reviewed By: SailorChibi On: September 20, 2002 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SailorChibi: I love your stories! Thank god you put them up here! Now, if only you'd continue them....
Himeko: Aibou, trust me. You do not need to read more NC-17 fics then you already have.
SailorChibi: Sure I do! Pay no attention to my yami. Anyways, I hope you update soon, if you're gonna update, that is. We both can't wait for the next chappie (if there is one), cause I know for a fact Himeko likes them as much as I do....
Himeko: I do not.
SialorChibi: Sure..... |
Reviewed By: Yami Pie On: September 20, 2002 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
........ Very Creative....I liked it plus it gave tea the chance to be shot down....even if she didnt cry.....oh well......I liked it alot I hope to se another by you....Good luck in the future....... |
Reviewed By: Samantha On: September 19, 2002 12:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
ILUVIT!!!!!!!!!!!!Hope you write the another one. Like Yami said at the end (^()^) |
Reviewed By: lol On: September 18, 2002 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:P |
Reviewed By: AngelHideki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2002 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Angel-chan: Good to know we can still read your fic, Starry!
Ayame: I'm still mad at FFNet for making you take it down, but now I'm just kind of glad that we haven't lost all of the really good authors and authoresses.
Angel-chan: Yup! Anyay, can't wait to see your next chapter, if you feel like writing it. |
Reviewed By: Minaki On: July 25, 2003 06:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great read ^_^
can't wait for the next chappie, where yugi gets to take yami! i must admit, that's my fav couple, when yugi's on top. |
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