| "Changing Visions" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: tania2273 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 06:27 CDT
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culd you please do ch4 & in it yugi takes yami.. please.
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Reviewed By: tania2273 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 06:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
i loved the fics,, and i have a request could you write ch4 and in it will be yugi taking yami
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Reviewed By: Nasyki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was nice...but...I think, the 1st lemon, sucked...I'd give it a 6, lacked things like, amount, to short...as 4 the end 1s....more of an 8...but thats because I have read a LOT of lemons, and most were hard core...but u should write more...YY/Ys...Y/YYs tend 2 get...less attation I think...
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 05:39 CST
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HAHAHAHAHA!!! nice little end note *falls off chair laughing her a** off* that was good. n e way, u really shouldn't put THE END at the end of your story if u plan to continue it. it's grammatically incorrect and VERY ANNOYING!! n e way, that was an AWSOME story, and this is the second time i've read this, actually... maybe the third? dunno if i reviewed before *too lazy to check* Toki ^_-
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Reviewed By: Yami'sLover On: December 16, 2003 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! i love this fic! i really really reallly hope u put up a chapter 4. i really want to know what it would be like if yugi...um did to yami what yami does to him. i have never read a fic like that so PLEASE add more!
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Reviewed By: Yami-yugi's_gurl909 On: August 23, 2003 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahh i loved it!!!!!! sry but i'm addicted to the Yami x Yugi pairing!!!!!! u did an excelent job!!!! i hope u write more cause i really enjoyed your work!!!!! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: August 03, 2003 04:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have reviewed this fic a long time ago. I read it first a long time ago. In fact it was my very first Yuugi&Yami fic! Cool huh? Really. I have loved them ever since. Thank you so much for being able to help me to begin my obsession! ^_^ Arigato! Ja ne!
~This is an awesome YY/Y fic! |
Reviewed By: Some Random idiot On: July 13, 2003 02:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! 4th chappy plz?!!??! |
Reviewed By: Weasal On: June 21, 2003 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best fics I have ever read. Needs more chapters !!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Weasal On: June 21, 2003 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best fics I have ever read. Needs more chapters !!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: MillenniumPurityMegami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks rapidly as she continually looks over screen for Chapter 4 button but finds nothing* No....This can't be it...Nooo!!! More! I MUST HAVE MORE!! O.O Please it's such a great fic, who cares if it's a PWP? Plotless sex stories kick ass! ^____^ Sorry a little wired up, plus I never read stories where Yugi's the *clear throat blushing* you know, taker....Please add more soon. *gives puppy eyes* |
Reviewed By: ElderWhisp [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 10:43 CDT
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This is really just cute. I like it. |
Reviewed By: Protector of the love between Yami and Yugi On: May 25, 2003 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job on the story. Though I do not see a plot in it. It is the same to see the same though. Yugi having to admit his feelings whilist Yami listens, than haves sex with Yugi, than tells Yugi that he loves him. |
Reviewed By: Lia-chan On: March 20, 2003 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic! I have a thing for YamixYugi lemon fics! They're my favorite couple! |
Reviewed By: Lia-chan On: March 20, 2003 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic! I have a thing for YamixYugi lemon fics! They're my favorite couple! |
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