| "Just The Way You Are" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: T Con [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, and yeah i know im kinda late to review(just got back into OLS). One of those lemons that actualy have a point. Only reason didnt give ya a complete ten is how fast they made up after Gene found out. Its possible to make up that fast, though I thought it was kinda quick. |
Reviewed By: Rikki II On: July 23, 2003 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!!
No, really it was very good!!!
I especially liked the lemony ending...but the whole thing was good. You could even make a sequel and i know that would be just as good!
Basically, I think that it's a great story and I want to read more!!
Thank you |
Reviewed By: Suki On: June 24, 2003 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing fanfiction. I'd have to say this in my favorate Outlaw Star fanfiction ever. Keep it up, you're quite talented.
~Suki~ |
Reviewed By: Kayoto On: April 09, 2003 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extremely great fanfic. The best one I've read yet, excellent writing, grammar, spelling, originality, EVERYTHING is great. Too bad you can't give 11 out of 10 on these reviews. |
Reviewed By: kmf On: January 23, 2003 06:30 CST
Comment/Review:
I didnt know that your wrote Outlaw Star fic! I was so pleased to see your name when I did a search and had to read your fic first of all. Wonderfully done, as all your lemons are, but I especially liked how it wasnt all smooth sailing and that Mel lost her virginity to J rather than Gene; made the whole story that much more believable. ^^ |
Reviewed By: blcrane52 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A masterpiece if I've ever read one. This has to be one of the best Outlaw Star fanfiction that I've ever read.I also like the fact that it isn't like many other lemons, whose story is pretty much non-existent, and instead is a very absorbing story that you will enjoy reading to the last syllable. I give it 2 thumbs up and a couple of toes. |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: December 24, 2002 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The tale of a girl whose innocense had almost abandoned her trying to turn her into the girl that she thaught that Gene Starwind would like. Then, teetering on the edge of darkness and hope, Melfina fell into the undying love of the person that stole her heart; thus taming the wild party animal, and hurtling the couple into happliy ever after... "A++" |
