| "The Mirai World" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Ronni On: July 13, 2003 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fic i have ever read. You should get an award for this. There was the one part where Videl and gohan actually had Pan. I really don't like Videl. I think Gohan should be paired with a character that's from an alternative universe. It kinda reminded me of charmed but it was still good. Please make anotherfic with Gohan and Lee. |
Reviewed By: Skyhigh On: September 24, 2002 16:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Keep writing...how else can I read??? Hurry and update!! |
