| "Controlling Lies, Painful Truths" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: Frabjousgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 13:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please update soon. I have been waiting for months for you to post the next chapter to your fic. I can't take the suspence much longer!!! PLEASE DON'T DO THIS TO AN AVID FAN OF YOURS!!!
~Frabs! |
Reviewed By: silver dragon On: June 29, 2003 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE update! |
Reviewed By: Elbereth in April [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 21:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah, I am so happy you updated, and I like this chapter, indeed I do. Keep up the good work (not that I have any doubts) and update soon, OK? |
Reviewed By: chimera On: March 01, 2003 10:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like ur fic! and i agree with catgurl with the plot twist-it would make it sweeter. PLEASE UPDATE SOON |
Reviewed By: surfer chick On: March 01, 2003 10:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude, c'mon! i check on this fic a few months later and u still have not updated! :( PLEASE update. this is a really good fic, one of my favorites, actually, so please do me a huge favor and update it, damnit! :P |
Reviewed By: MajinDragon On: December 21, 2002 08:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is the BEST ever please write more soon!!!!! |
Reviewed By: suzygurl On: December 11, 2002 20:48 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!!! I BEG YOU!!! IT WOULD MAKE THE PERFECT EARLY CHRISTMAS PRESENT!! PLEASE SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 13:43 CST
Comment/Review:
hey! nice fic!! and very original! Will vegeta get better?? well, please post a new chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: silverdragon On: December 06, 2002 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv ur fic! but, when r u gonna update? please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: catgurl On: November 18, 2002 21:42 CST
Comment/Review:
PlEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! I want to see what happens to poor Vegeta!! I think it would be interesting if you had Frieza capture Vegeta, Bulma, Gohan, and Krillan. I think it would give the story a nice twist. please write more. I always look for your creative, and orginal story!!!! |
Reviewed By: Hosi-chan02 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 17:35 CST
Comment/Review:
You started this fic in September? Hmm, I wonder why I didn't notice it til now...weird.
Yeah, I don't even like my own titles, so sorry, I can't help you with your title problem.
So far, I like it! Please post more soon; I can't wait to see what's gonna happen to my Veggie! |
Reviewed By: Kylie On: November 02, 2002 07:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story could you please write more soon??? oh and do you know you have ch3 posted twice lol. |
Reviewed By: surfer chick On: November 02, 2002 04:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work! this fic is awesome!! this is totally different from all of the other fics and i luv it! pleez update ASAP! :) |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story keep it up and I want more |
Reviewed By: Elbereth in April [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh boy oh boy oh boy what fun!
Now Bulma has to begin to understand his hidden secrets. (I have been reading too much angst.)
I liked very much, it was very good. A great overflowing of happiness comes upon me whenever you update. So make me happy again. :) |
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