| "So Happy Together" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: Broli the Destroyah On: February 25, 2004 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Listen to the angry people! Update this fic! NOW! -_-
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Reviewed By: Broli the Destroyah On: February 06, 2004 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you kill Rei? You better do something quick before angry people try to do bad things. And UPDATE! -_-
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Title: update this!!!
Reviewed By: redhead-killing monster On: January 08, 2004 21:13 CST
Comment/Review:
hey! update this thing! its funny,entertaining, and very nice. well, i would be complaining about the ooc-ness but because there is always an explanation in every event, the ooc factor is not much of a bad factor. i like the way you tame that bitchy asuka!! ^_^ nice job and update this thing! please...
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Title: update this!!!
Reviewed By: redhead-killing monster On: January 08, 2004 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! update this thing! its funny,entertaining, and very nice. well, i would be complaining about the ooc-ness but because there is always an explanation in every event, the ooc factor is not much of a bad factor. i like the way you tame that bitchy asuka!! ^_^ nice job and update this thing! please...
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Reviewed By: yo On: November 18, 2003 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its been over a year it cant take you that long
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Title: Grate
Reviewed By: D On: November 16, 2003 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grate and mack shinji and rei both the 3rd comander
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Title: How long must we wait?
Reviewed By: Unknown Flamer On: November 07, 2003 03:32 CST
Comment/Review:
How long must we wait for another chapter of this fic? It's been more than a year now.
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Reviewed By: n3o^Aya On: October 28, 2003 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
god let this pos die...
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Reviewed By: Ultaraguyver [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 05:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was BRILLIANT and from me thats saying much because I hate to read things this long. The grammar could be improved but that doesn't bother me unless it is really, really bad. Just a few requests though: 1.PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish this, please I hate cliff hangers and I'm a DBZ/GT fan and they always end with cliff hangers. Hell if you want I'll pay you to continue writing. 2.Please let Rei live, I'm a sucker for happy endings. 3.Will some body please shot Akagi betwwen the eyes. Thanx
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Title: Everquest Paladin
Reviewed By: Iuldias On: September 18, 2003 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've reviewed your fic before (on FFN) but after reading some of the other reviews, felt I should do so here as well.
Watch out with your spellchecker, some don't catch when the wrong word is used as long as it's spelled correctly. It mught help to have someone go over all the chapters and correct the incidents in which the wrong word was used. Other than that, it's a very fun fic that I still love to read :)
P.S. Ignore the so-called FFY, they're immature children who actually think their collective opinion matters to anyone with a brain and the ability to use it. Please continue to write this story and I hope to see an update soon. |
Reviewed By: Shadowmaster62 On: September 07, 2003 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Some people like this fic, others don't. But god people, don't even waste time reviewing if your just going to bitch about how you hated it. If you were that wounded by it, go read something else. It's fun to read an OOC once in a while, and if you have enough spare time to read 500 hundred page stories just so you can write about how much you despise it, try writing your own fanfic. |
Reviewed By: Fucktastic On: August 19, 2003 04:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
No need to give a reason. I now see the True: it's just a brainless S/R written by a clueless fangirl...
Written by a fangirl, for a bunch of fanboys, SHT is one of the works that defines what fangirl's fanfictions are all about. It contains the perfect imbalance of lame ideas and ships ripped from Evangelion, and is a totally deformed vision of the serie which vomit new masochist phantasms about the characters while keeping them untrue to their original personalities. Kimberly is an author who is afraid to read impartial comments (MST MST MST), and it should be obvious that it paid off with this and several of her other fanfiction fiascos. Overall, a quite hilarious work to read (if you enjoy brainless shippers fics), recommended for any R/S fan in total despair who don't care about such thing as OOCs, pathetically long descriptions of guns, brainless deification of Rei and unless characters bashing. |
Reviewed By: adam On: August 11, 2003 03:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i reallllly liked this fic alot...been waitin for an update for awhile now though...if you do still read these reviews, update soon! |
Reviewed By: Blahman (again) On: July 31, 2003 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry, but, ..., your just a jackass. Be more specific if u complain, I'd e-mail this to u, but I can't find your address...
so.. I'll just say your a &#@^*&#^&*@$^$&*)^^)*&^)(#@^$^#@&*^$((&$#@*^&*$^*%^*(&^%*^*$&@^*#^)%^*#@%^($(&*%^@*#^$*&*()&#(^&$^(tedious, ain't it?)&@#^(*%$@%($&#%^(#%(&&*$#^&$^. |
Reviewed By: Blahman On: July 31, 2003 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you ever going to update this?
If you are, keep up the good work! |
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