| "So Happy Together" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: Good-GUy On: July 26, 2003 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked your fic it kinda left me hanging was wondering if u could finish it i see it's been a while though so u most likliy gave up!!!! damn u!!!! |
Reviewed By: ... On: July 21, 2003 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
... I'll keep it simple...
1) watch the anime
2) if u watched it already... watch it again and pay attention for once
3) delete all traces of SHT from your computer and online
4) never post shit like that again |
Reviewed By: SonRyoga On: July 17, 2003 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOC is not character dev |
Reviewed By: sistergaia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!!! I love the way you've taken to develop the characters. Please update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Bobby Blackrose On: June 26, 2003 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kimberly, i truely hope that you continue writing because i honestly enjoyed your fanfiction. I Don't read much Evangelion fanfiction, im more a Ranma 1/2 lover when it comes to fanfiction, but i must admit i read your fic when it was on Fanfiction.net and truly enjoyed it. I applaud you for writing what you have and reread it when out of new fics every several months (which i rarely do,reread something that is,because i remember most of it anyway if i enjoyed it,so for me thats saying a lot.) I truly hope you continue writing, it would be a shame if this fanfic faded away into the 'lost and forgotten' category. Anyway please keep up the work, and even if you dont continue, thank you for writing this much. |
Reviewed By: Shinji Yagami On: June 20, 2003 08:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do I have to say anything else? But is there more...I want more!!!!! |
Reviewed By: SonRyoga On: July 15, 2003 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear to god I thought TommyRude, me and Ayanami KILLED this fic. Well guess what...we're back. Your fic sucks. Your writing sucks. Your Asuka bashing is uncalled for and lame. I'm a Rei Shinji fan..but this is just SHiT....
Anyways, we'll kill it. Have fun~ |
Reviewed By: nanashi kag3 On: July 15, 2003 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao i thought this was dead. Anyway most of this is based on the fact u think S/R make a cute couple as some have alrdy stated. Just wondered have u read a real fic? http://rkawards.gloriousforest.net/year.html read this u mindles baka sheep. Get a clue ur bashing charz on the fact u do not like them. Have u herd of sumthing we like to call a plot. This is by far one of the worst things iv read next to "gendo you bastard".Do us all a favor and fall out that window behind u and remove ur genes from the alrdy decaying times created by ppl like urself .gg nunbz |
Reviewed By: brian On: June 13, 2003 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. ive read it almost three times over the past year or so and ive been left hanging for so long pleeeeeaaaassseee finish it *sob* |
Reviewed By: Mike Doyle On: June 04, 2003 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I spent the last two days reading this fic, and my conclusion is:
I like it!
Your characterizations are, overall, a plausible extrapolation from the very badly broken people we met in NGE. Gendo and Kozo were only a little bit of a stretch, but a reasonable stretch when we remember that this universe is a joint construct of Shinji and Rei/Lillith. Plotting and pacing are good, and you have a very nice narrative voice (it improves with practice, and that's the only thing I could suggest as a style "issue"). The citrusy parts are handled in good taste, and do good service in advancing the romance - without any sense of an exploitive or prurient intent (which is pretty rare in fanfic).
Unfortunately, I have to ding you for a few grammatical errors that should've been caught on a proofreading (maybe you could give each chapter just one additional pass before you post).
I'm not one to get fanatically hung up about following canon, but I keep hitting a bit of a snag when I try to reconcile this with EoE. Not a complaint, really - we can chalk it up as a divergence. It works, and it beats hell out of the postapocalyptic "S & A in the ruins" story that's been rather overdone.
Nice work rebuilding the world after 3I, and it's a well - constructed world, at that (though I must admit I found the Ikari family tradition of a personalized ceramic gun to be just a little over the top)
I loved the hell out of it - what can I say? I've always had a soft spot for romance. And thanks for giving Asuka a shot at redemption - she's not my favorite character, but I always thought she got more of a bashing than she deserved.
Bottom Line: I do so hope you're gonna finish this soon. |
Reviewed By: Shinji--Ikari On: June 03, 2003 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic because, 1. It has my favorite pairing R/S. 2. Because it has a nice flow to it. and 3. I just plainly enjoy it. Very good Fanfic overall.. I wish you would finish it. |
Reviewed By: SonRyoga On: July 15, 2003 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
By the way, note that nanashi kag3 is Ayanami. |
Reviewed By: Arsenal On: May 15, 2003 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your chapter 19 was very cute and I am glad you didn't put the detailes of the date in reading about the lead up and then haveing the readers use their imaginations in my opinon is always better.
So far I have loved every single chapter. That duet title was very sweet as well.
I feel sad that Rei is now stuck as third comander all to save that molester Misato.
In all honesty I don't find that to OOC in fact I find the idea of Misato molesting her charge rather beliveable somehow. |
Reviewed By: Procyon On: May 12, 2003 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this Story it is so beautiful, I truly wish you would have come out with more so that I can continue to admire your masterful works of art. |
Reviewed By: tidus_ff On: April 26, 2003 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this fic ages ago, but it still hasn't been updated!? I guess its not going to be finished huh?
What happened? I know something happened with all the jealous people not liking all the fans and praise Kim was getting? Please Kim!!! ignore these ignorant people and continue writing!! These people are obviously jealous and they also have no idea what the word "fanfiction" means!! Keep writing and ignore those poor sad people who have nothing better to do, other than trying to destroy better skilled writers who they are so jealous of they would spend ages trying to rally support to go against you! LOL That just speaks for itself! You should be proud! :) |
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