| "So Happy Together" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: DI On: April 15, 2003 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this fan fic and was very impressed with the creativity that has been put into it. i is one of the longest fanfics i have ever read and i loved every second of it thanks but when are you going to come out with the rest of the chapter i am practicaly crying i am so eager to see how it ends PLEASE HURRY!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: April 14, 2003 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought the plot was very good. It is one of the best Evangelion fics I have read. I didn't know what the secret project Rei was working on until Misato read the report and I liked that suspense. I can't wait to find out what happens to everybody. I hope a new chapter comes out soon. |
Reviewed By: concern On: March 22, 2003 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So when exactly are you going to finish your fic
The suspense is killing me!! I read this a whole year ago and still no new chap!! You know, it is just wrong to get to a good part and then stop!! LETS GET A MOVE ON IT!! |
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron On: March 12, 2003 07:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I read up to chapter 36(35)
when are you going to continue this?
it surely cannot end at such a traumatic cliffhanger? |
Reviewed By: Sandman On: March 12, 2003 02:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good series that could do with a bit of editing. Your versions of characters are generally more mature but oddly evil. Multiple spelling errors, missing words, odd grammer. Good story though.
Greatest complaint is....You write too slow! |
Reviewed By: Procyon On: March 08, 2003 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent more more more!MUST HAVE MORE! |
Reviewed By: harvman85 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 04:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
I fell asleep during the first chapter. So FUCKING BORING |
Reviewed By: Mikeyguy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 13:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic. Ive been readin it for the last couple of days and i cant wait to see how it ends. plz plz plz finish the story soon. I cant wait to see what shinji does to dr akagi. and i wanna know if kawaru (cant spell) and asuka get married. |
Reviewed By: parasectman [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is just soooo good.i give you my compliments.are you sure you're not a writer? |
Reviewed By: AlZeroX On: January 30, 2003 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very good stuff and you should continue writing. Liked it alot, keep it up |
Reviewed By: Dark Marine On: January 28, 2003 11:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read a lot of Fanfiction regarding Evangelion lately and even though the characters are OOC, they at least gradually change to that from the beginning. Spelling and Grammar could be improved....greatly, but at least it only requires one or two looks back to figure out the word. I enjoy both S/A and S/R fics easily and the style of your fic is excellent, comedic scenes are usually at the right place, though sometimes the story seems a little longwinded at times. Overall it's a very enjoyable fic and I hope to see the rest of it soon. I've read some negative reviews around about you and I'm sure you may have heard of them. Don't let them discourage you, everyones a critic to their own degree. |
Reviewed By: Lifeless On: January 25, 2003 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kimberly, you're a goddess of WAFF. You probably look like a goddess in real life too. I won't even doubt that for a second. My life is so much brighter that I read your story. |
Reviewed By: Nadeisco On: January 22, 2003 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well how to put this...
I've read many fan-fic's, to many to count, from a wide variety of animes/games. Now after reading this one [I'm only up to Chapter 12 myself], I have to admit, you have great potential as an actual writer, the skill with which you right is absolutely astounding.
I greatly look forward to future work from you Kimberly, and if you ever just want to talk about Evangelion or Anime, or anything really, contact me, webmaster@digitalnova.co.uk
See.. I'm one of those people that doesn't really care about giving their email address out.. go me!
Now before anyone accuses me of the old 1/10.. 10/10 trick, don't try it, I honestly rated this fic with what I believed to be fair, and also to the person who accused her of being a "Fangirl," I like Asuka, Rei, Shinji and nearly the entire cast of Evangelion, and even though many people have picked up om the Rei/Shinji storyline before, this has got to be one of the, if not the, best I have ever read, so give Kimberly a break, she writes amazing work. |
Reviewed By: Unknown Flamer On: January 19, 2003 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are a few grammer errors, such as the wrong tense or word or an occasional missing word. The style of writing is easy to read, easy on the eyes, and it makes the story flow well. Finally, this story should have the NC-17 rating instead of the R rating as it does contain somewhat graphic sexual activities. I do find that this is a very enjoyable story. |
Reviewed By: Kevin On: January 16, 2003 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
a very well written story, been reading it since it's been on FF.net.
I am highly anticipating the conclusion to this wonderful story |
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