| "So Happy Together" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: Akira On: January 16, 2003 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLASE CONTINUE THE FANFIC, BECAUSE I WANT TO REED THE END PLEES CONTINUE.
I really love the fanfic. |
Reviewed By: NEON On: January 13, 2003 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT |
Reviewed By: Colin Ryan On: January 13, 2003 22:38 CST
Comment/Review:
BLASHEMY!
I declare a fawtah on your head you dumb bitch! |
Reviewed By: Phil On: January 08, 2003 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT!!! I feel as though I should worship the ground you walk on! I love this! Drag the ending out please! |
Reviewed By: A Concerned Patron On: January 06, 2003 07:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Kimberly, some jerkoff named Diros. *Points to the name above* Is MSTing your fic without permission. The name of it is MST-So Happy Together. Look what he's doing to it.
Loved,
A concerned patron. |
Reviewed By: Diros On: January 06, 2003 07:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
-_- Give me a break...
Your fic is merely based off the fact you think Rei and Shinji look like such a KEYOOT couple. Your Askua bashing is unforgivable as well. -_-
Your stupid stupid fangirl. |
Reviewed By: Tony On: January 05, 2003 03:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've loved reading your fic. i can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Socie-tron On: December 22, 2002 04:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hunger intensely for more of this -fabulous- fic! Absolutely dripping with anticipation, hoping for an update. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: zero On: December 18, 2002 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it,..
I,ve red many fics .
but this one hit me.
I hope its a happy ending????
& would someone please KILL gendo?
the niceguy isn,t him.
same for ritsuko.
I got an idea how about adding .
an evil shinji;;;;;
someone to stirup trouble
just a thaught.
TO Be CONIUED>. |
Reviewed By: Lucky On: December 10, 2002 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this fic has raised more emtions in the eva community then any other I know. I find the fact that it was removed from ff.net quite unfortunate.
As for the review, the only REALLY bad thing about this fic that would need fixing is grammar. Since I'm not a native english speaker, I have a pretty high tolerance for misspelled words, but even I find myself bohered by the amount of grammatical errors. A simple pre-reading would help shaving a lot of those errors off.
Not much else to say except tp encourage you to finish this fic. And request to continue the "Searching for Eden", which imho is your best work so far. |
Reviewed By: zero On: November 09, 2002 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it I love it I LOVE IT.
I started reading this fic on fanfiction.net.
And I was hooked .
I just have 1 tiny request .
please PLEASE don,t kill rei?
shinji&rei are so cute together,.
It almost makes me cry.
I have got to see the ending.
I hope it,s a happy one
loveit
CONTINUE. |
Reviewed By: David Johnson On: November 07, 2002 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic. It's original, has a good plot, and balances all the characters elements without becoming boring or tiresome. The grammer and spelling arent' perfect, but what is?(see example above this line) It dosen't detract from the story, which is good. All in all, a great fanfic. Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Pyrex On: October 17, 2002 01:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Where's the intermission. That was the best part of SHiT? SHiT just isn't SHiT without the intermission!!! |
Reviewed By: DREDNAX On: October 14, 2002 03:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I stopped reading this half way through. Despite a great liking for the Shinji/Rei relationship, this was just becoming too repetative. Try putting in more believable character interactions next time. |
Reviewed By: *god x hunter* On: October 11, 2002 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is one of the best i have read(removing the hentai parts)you got potential! |
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