Reviewed By: Laydee Deathstrike On: December 06, 2003 19:11 CST Comment/Review: I luvved it!! superb^^ keep writing grl. u got tha gift^^
Reviewed By: moonsoldier gundam pilot On: December 14, 2002 21:06 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: this is very original but a little too short for me to enjoy really well. I think there should be more Hentai!!!!!!( yeah i know I'm pathetic) keep writing.