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| "Sonic Kids Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Title: Dude, weres my dignity?
Reviewed By: sonicscrndude2 On: September 07, 2005 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you know me you know that i beleive that lemons can be good as long as there is a plot point. this one gives me some! thanks man! otherwise i would just like to let the story speak for itself.......omitting only that she was masturbating in the water.Julayla came back with a box and... stripped naked. Of course, many Mobians went around naked, but when one was usually dressed and then went naked, it usually mean't something.Sally didn't know what to say. revealing dildos, strap-ons and creams. I'm gonna cum! The mentor put her head between Sally's legs and tasted the non-stoping flowing juices. Is… the lesson over? - Do you want it to be over? Sally! Don't look! I'm naked!, came Sonic's reply.Then she thought: we're all naked!He had your thing in his mouth.This kissing thing rocks, he thought.He now felt his erection starting to grow.I… it was great. It was really better then… uh, pizza.I'm not going to say anything about the fact that you masturbate. you can draw your own conclusions.
| Title: I loved this fic!
Reviewed By: I wont give my name On: December 12, 2003 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't listen to those fuck-heads... they could all probably be dead by now! But, hey, I thought this fanfic was, not good, not excellent, but OUTSTANDING!!! I LOVE it written in script-form, easier to understand. As for the other reviewers, you see those... those... uh... "things"... "pathetic excuses for humans"... just don't understand what you're trying to say! When I was their age, I had sexual thoughts too, and so does everyone else in the whole world (if they deny it, they're lying!) Besides, they're cartoon characters, they're not REAL!!! They're ANIMALS! Animals have sexual feelings at young ages! I LOVED it!!!
| Reviewed By: Gino C. Ortiz On: October 06, 2003 22:00 CDT
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Kiddie porn... ewww...
| Reviewed By: True Dark Zero On: March 23, 2003 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright I'm not going to trash talk you about this lemon. I mean you did'nt force me to read it. It was.... interesting. | Reviewed By: Nessie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 14:14 CST
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But good, it a weird kinda sick 4 year old, i always thought sonic was innocent kinda way....
You like hentai? read my story. Rendezvous. | Reviewed By: Thom On: October 15, 2002 18:39 CDT
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Jesus, That's some sick shit. | Reviewed By: You went too far. On: September 29, 2002 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
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This was too far. |
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