| "Four Killer and a Baby, English Version" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: daddy Yotan...
Reviewed By: ianustes (a.k.a.joanne) On: October 14, 2003 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the idea of Yohji being a dad is soooooo very endearing! And Aya and Ken having knowledge of babies is... well, it's kinda weird for guys to know but... endearing as well. And Miriam's point of view is cool, her reffering to the fangirls as monsters and all... Hope you get around to finishing this fic, 'coz I sure do want to read the rest of it.
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Reviewed By: Thorne [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 02:03 CDT
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Poor Miriam. I hope that Yohji gets the hang of being a Father soon. It's great that he had Aya and Ken to help take care of the baby. This is such a sweet fic, I love it.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Lilla [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh God, oh dear!!! Enna gal put the notice about drinking in the main summary!! It was too fun for words and after all I should have known better than to try and drink while reading the new chapter... Ehehhe poor Yotan ehehe oh the hassle of caring for a baby!!! Now gal you delivered and just before I started to seriously get on your case about this fic. But you are not off the hook yet I want more and more and more!!! Cough a bit more PLEEEAAASEEEE!!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: DivineAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 10:14 CDT
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Omg your story was really really sweet. I have heard Aya is a hard character to write and have him come out remotely sweet. This is also the first fic I've read that threw a baby into the Weiss situation. Wonderfully done, I would luv to hear more.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Yasaman On: March 17, 2003 11:14 CST
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So far reading it is fun.
I like the idea of axy + the kid
hope to see more of it.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Thorne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 12:02 CST
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Awww, this is the cutest story! I just love Aya in this story, figures that he would know everything.
Keep up the good work![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Lilla On: March 10, 2003 08:33 CST
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Enna, ROFL.
Oh dear god gal you did manage to do me in this one time! it was too funny for words!!! Gasps... OK maybe just maybe I am going to survive but tone this down or you will have me on your conscience! ^.^ Keep this coming I might be a little of a masochist but I love reading this death danger and all!
Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW....FANTASTIC...ooohhhh it's soooooo LOVELY, SWEET, KAWAII and a lot more!!!!
*giggle*...Miriam sucking on Aya's finger *giggle*...it have to look gloriously^^
Go on with it...SOOOON, pweeeaaaase...I can't wait...it's sooooooo KAWAIIIIII !!!!!!!! ^_____^
Ja *wants to suck on Aya's finger, too* *oops...I didn't say it out loud...did I* O_O
Koji-chan^^[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 08:35 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ooooh this cracks me up. Please continue,I enjoyed it a lot![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Chelle On: September 28, 2002 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Wow! Sapphire [ Dewdrops to me ] asked me to read this and this is very good! Hopefully you'll continue because this is very, very funny!! Keep the good work up.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Jacque Koh [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2002 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh, this is neat. Loved Youji's reaction to being landed with the responsibility of a baby. Hope to see more soon, though I wonder if I'd like to see the mother move in with them, per the movie.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Taesaki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2002 14:30 CDT
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lol! i really like this fic so far. it would be just like youji to get some girl pregnant, now wouldn't it? i think you got the characterization down pat, very funny indeed. i can't wait for Ken and Omi to show up. nice job! ^.^[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Forsaken [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2002 14:26 CDT
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Like I told you before, this is a great little fic you have going. I can't wait until the next installment. Keep up the wondeful job. ^_^[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: anime gher [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2002 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, that's great! Yohji finally gets what he deserves for sleeping around so much. It'd be such a healthy family, Aya for mom and Yohji for dad. I'm just giggling about what will happen next! I'm not sure what I should expect, but I think it'll be great![ Request Review Removal ] |
