| "Breaking the Ice...Queen" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: The Last Face [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another exile from FF.net! I loved this on there, and it's still just as good! Finish it sometime, It's very good. |
Reviewed By: ChibiRenamon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 17:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Few notes:
This story will be concluded, but I've felt that my current mood isn't really compatible to the mood of the story.
Renamon really does display more emotions than in the show. Her grim and distant behaviour would be OOC since she's in love in this fic ;)
Continuity: Juri is not a Tamer and has not yet met Leomon. Because of the turn of events in this fic, it's hard to speak of continuity since a Ruki/Juri romance would have many consequences for the plot.
And NO, I will NOT post my stuff at the DigimonHentaiZone because they steal fan art in the form of their Grab Bag. I do not wish to become a part of a site that actively supports art-stealing.
BUT my completed stories will be posted at http://www.digiartistsdomain.com
I'd like to thank the reviewers for their input. You're giving me the strength to write more :)
And to the faceless crowd: Hey, gimme a review! I'd like to know your opinion, too! ^^ |
Reviewed By: omechron On: January 28, 2003 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice! I like how you portrayed Ruki and Juri's vulnerabilities. Not real sure where in the continuity this goes, though...
You did have the occasional wierd turn of phrase... and rennamon spoke a bit more informally than I'm used to. But then, I've only seen the dub...
You should post it to www.digimonhentaizone.tk... I'm sure they'll love it! |
Reviewed By: Impmon On: October 23, 2002 19:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Here's an idea for non consent bondage torture. Capture someone like Takato, tie him up and naked. And then make him do nothing but watch as the pair makes out. With the bondage, he wouldn't be able to relief himself ;)
And a futon is a couch/bed convertable. Typically the bed is full size. Flip one half and it converts to a couch big enough for 3 adults. Flip it again and it becomes a bed. Really useful for small room (ie apartment) |
Reviewed By: jster1983 On: October 16, 2002 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have only one question. What is a futon? |
Reviewed By: SecretDBZWizard On: October 15, 2002 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Rena,
I tried to read some of your stories, but i couldn't find them because there wasn't a NC-17 section anymore... the when i click on one of my fav. authors (You, of course), i saw that you put a link up. And well... here i am! ^_^. Bottom line is, your story is awesome. Your story was well written, entertaining, decriptive, and suspensefull. Overall, i give it a 10! If your wondering why Fanfiction.net canceled your story, and every other NC-17 writer's stories... I had one of my.. um.. recourceful friends look into it, and it's because FF.NET Doesnt allow Nc-17 Fics anymore. And since your stories are Nc-17...
well, i think you now... BUT I THINK NC-17 FICS ARE JUST AS GREAT AS THE REGULAR ONES!!! But FF.net can't be helped... *Sigh* Anyway, don't try to e-mail me yet, because my passwords to aol were messed up, so i had to cancel aol. The how am i writing this right now? Im using a different internet service, but i still need to get the e-mail stuff set up. But anyway, i will keep in touch.
Think Positive thoughts, and have a nice day! |
Reviewed By: Mr Ninja On: October 13, 2002 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, I read it on FF.net before they purged their site, this story has a combination of yuri, masturbation, BDSM, and etc...
But is there a next chapter?
Will there be a next chapter? |
Reviewed By: Ale On: October 03, 2002 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Make one about the Digimon frontier series?? |
Reviewed By: Seto Kaiba Lover On: September 19, 2002 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fanfic!! Write more of the story please!! |
Reviewed By: Impmon On: September 19, 2002 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked it a lot. More of them please, especially in bondage! |
